install-guide fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,1.5,1.6
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri May 13 22:44:00 UTC 2005
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv32124
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
Log Message:
Style edit fixes.
Also fixed spelling of licence/license within text to match US.
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 11 May 2005 23:38:04 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 13 May 2005 22:43:58 -0000 1.6
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
<title>On First Boot</title>
<para>
- The first time that you load a new installation of &FC; the Setup
- Agent is launched, enabling you to configure the basic elements of the
- system.
+ The <application>Setup Agent</application> launches the first time
+ that you start a new &FED; system. This enables you to configure
+ the system for use before logging in.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-welcome">
@@ -27,11 +27,11 @@
</figure>
<para>
- Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to start the Setup Agent.
+ Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to start the <application>Setup Agent</application>.
</para>
<note>
- <title>The Setup Agent requires a graphical interface</title>
+ <title>The <application>Setup Agent</application> requires a graphical interface</title>
<para>
You must manually carry out these configuration tasks if the Setup
Agent cannot run.
@@ -40,12 +40,12 @@
<sect1 id="s1-firstboot-licence">
- <title>Licence Agreement</title>
+ <title>License Agreement</title>
<para>
- This screen displays the overall licencing terms for &FC;.
- Individual software packages are covered by their own licences.
- Every software product included in &FC; uses a licence that has
+ This screen displays the overall licensing terms for &FC;.
+ Individual software packages are covered by their own licenses.
+ Every software product included in &FC; uses a license that has
been approved by the Open Source Initiative (OSI).
</para>
@@ -60,14 +60,14 @@
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<para>
- Licence agreement screen.
+ License agreement screen.
</para>
</textobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
<para>
- To proceed, select <guilabel>Yes, I agree to the Licence
+ To proceed, select <guilabel>Yes, I agree to the License
Agreement</guilabel> and click <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
</para>
@@ -78,14 +78,15 @@
<title>Date and Time</title>
<para>
- You can either manually set the date and time for your system, or
- configure your system to use NTP (Network Time Protocol) servers
- to maintain the clock. NTP ensures that the time is always accurate.
+ To configure a system that does not have Internet access, manually
+ set the date and time for your system at this screen. If your
+ system has network access, use NTP (Network Time Protocol) servers
+ to maintain the accuracy of the clock.
</para>
<para>
The initial display enables you to set the date and time of your
- system manually:
+ system manually.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-time">
@@ -107,7 +108,7 @@
<para>
Select the <guilabel>Network Time Protocol</guilabel> tab to
- configure your system to use network time servers instead.
+ configure your system to use NTP servers instead.
</para>
<tip>
@@ -249,10 +250,10 @@
<title>Display</title>
<para>
- The Setup Agent attempts to identify the graphics hardware and
- monitor for your computer. It also uses this information to
- calculate the correct <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> and
- <guilabel>Color Depth</guilabel> settings.
+ The <application>Setup Agent</application> automatically attempts
+ to identify the graphics card and monitor for your computer. It also uses
+ this information to calculate the correct
+ <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> and <guilabel>Color Depth</guilabel> settings.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-display">
@@ -302,10 +303,11 @@
</figure>
<para>
- You also can select different <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> and
- <guilabel>Color Depth</guilabel> settings by choosing them from
- the drop-down lists. Only the settings that are valid for the
- hardware are displayed.
+ To change a display setting, click
+ <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> or <guilabel>Color
+ Depth</guilabel>, and select a new value from the drop-down list. The
+ <application>Setup Agent</application> only shows the settings
+ that are valid for your hardware.
</para>
<tip>
@@ -314,7 +316,7 @@
To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed,
use the <application>system-config-display</application>
utility. From the main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
- Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+ Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
</para>
</tip>
@@ -325,10 +327,8 @@
<title>Sound Card</title>
<para>
- The Setup Agent automatically identifies the sound card in your
- computer. To confirm that the sound card is configured
- correctly, click <guibutton>Play Test Sound</guibutton>. You
- should then hear a series of three sounds.
+ The <application>Setup Agent</application> automatically
+ identifies the sound card in your computer.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-sound">
@@ -347,7 +347,20 @@
</textobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
-
+
+ <para>
+ Click <guibutton>Play Test Sound</guibutton>. If you hear a
+ series of three sounds then your system has been configured
+ successfully. If your sound card is identified but you do not
+ hear these sounds, check your speakers and try again.
+ </para>
+
+ <para>
+ You can manually configure a &FED; system to use unsupported sound
+ cards after the installation process is complete. Manual hardware
+ configuration is beyond the scope of this document.
+ </para>
+
<tip>
<title>Changing the sound card</title>
<para>
@@ -410,8 +423,8 @@
</figure>
<para>
- After you click <guilabel>Next</guilabel>, the login screen will
- appear. Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
+ Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed to the login
+ screen. Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
</para>
</sect1>
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