install-guide fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml,1.5,1.6

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml	12 May 2005 23:55:58 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml	14 May 2005 15:20:02 -0000	1.6
@@ -4,29 +4,45 @@
   <title>Network Configuration</title>
 
   <para>
-    This screen enables you to customize the network settings of the
-    final system.  
+    This screen enables you to customize the network settings of your
+    &FED; system.  Networking is a complex subject which is currently
+    beyond the scope of this document.  For more information on basic
+    networking concepts, refer to one or more of the following
+    documents.  To find a specific title online, search for the title
+    using an Internet search engine such as Google (<ulink
+      url="http://www.google.com/">http://www.google.com/</ulink>).
   </para>
 
+  <itemizedlist>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>
+	Chapters 1 and 2 of the <citetitle>Linux Network Administrators
+	Guide</citetitle>
+      </para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>
+	The <citetitle>Linux Networking-HOWTO</citetitle>
+      </para>
+    </listitem>
+  </itemizedlist>
+
   <para>
-    It is not necessary to manually configure these settings if your
-    computer will be part of an existing network, or if it is a laptop
-    that will move between networks.  By default, &FC; will activate
-    all of the network interfaces on your computer and configure them to
-    use DHCP.  Most networks have a DHCP service that can automatically
-    supply your system with connection information.
+    You may not need to manually configure these settings if your
+    computer is part of an existing network, or if it is a laptop that
+    moves between networks.  By default, &FC; activates all of the
+    network interfaces on your computer and configures them to use
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>DHCP (Dynamic Host Control Protocol)</primary>
+    </indexterm> <firstterm>DHCP</firstterm>, or Dynamic Host Control
+    Protocol. Most networks have a DHCP service that automatically
+    supplies connected systems with configuration data.
   </para>
 
   <para>
     Wireless interfaces using DHCP will join an open wireless network
     once it is in range.  Many wireless networks are restricted, and
-    will only accept systems which also have the correct security
-    credentials.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> once you are satisfied with the
-    network settings for your system.
+    only accept systems which have the correct security credentials.
   </para>
 
   <figure id="fig-net-config-dhcp">
@@ -47,14 +63,16 @@
   </figure>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-network-devices">
+  <section id="sn-network-devices">
     <title>Network Devices</title>
 
     <para>
-      The list on the screen shows the network interfaces that the
-      installation system has detected on your computer.  Each interface
-      will have a unique address on the network that it is attached to.
-      This IP address can be assigned by the network DHCP service.
+      The installation program displays a list of network interfaces
+      detected on your computer.  Each interface must have a unique
+      <firstterm>IP address</firstterm> <indexterm>
+	<primary>IP address</primary>
+      </indexterm> on the network to which it is attached. This address
+      may be assigned by the network DHCP service.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -89,10 +107,10 @@
       </para>
     </note>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-computer-hostname">
+  <section id="sn-computer-hostname">
     <title>Computer Hostname</title>
 
     <para>
@@ -114,10 +132,10 @@
       </para>
     </tip>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-network-misc-settings">
+  <section id="sn-network-misc-settings">
     <title>Miscellaneous Settings</title>
 
     <para>
@@ -143,7 +161,17 @@
       to three DNS servers.
     </para>
 
-  </sect1>
+  <para>
+    Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> once you are satisfied with the
+    network settings for your system.
+  </para>
+
+  <para>
+    Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> once you are satisfied with the
+    network settings for your system.
+  </para>
+
+  </section>
 </chapter>
 
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