install-guide fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml,1.8,1.9

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv27041

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml 
Log Message:
Remove wordiness, emphasize Fedora



Index: fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml	14 May 2005 21:51:58 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-networkconfig-en.xml	14 May 2005 21:57:38 -0000	1.9
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@
     <title>Network Devices</title>
 
     <para>
-      The installation program displays a list of network interfaces
-      detected on your computer.  Each interface must have a unique
-      <firstterm>IP address</firstterm> <indexterm>
+      &FED; displays a list of network interfaces detected on your
+      computer.  Each interface must have a unique <firstterm>IP
+	address</firstterm> <indexterm>
 	<primary>IP address</primary>
       </indexterm> on the network to which it is attached. The interface
       may receive this address from the network DHCP service.
@@ -59,13 +59,12 @@
     <para>
       To manually assign an IP address, highlight the interface on the
       <guilabel>Network Device</guilabel> list and select
-      <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>.  The installation program then
-      displays a network configuration dialog.
-      <emphasis>Deselect</emphasis> the <guilabel>Configure using
-	DHCP</guilabel> checkbox, so that it is empty.  Enter the
-      <guilabel>IP Address</guilabel> and the appropriate
-      <guilabel>Netmask</guilabel> for the interface.  Then select
-      <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.
+      <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>.  &FED; then displays a network
+      configuration dialog. <emphasis>Deselect</emphasis> the
+      <guilabel>Configure using DHCP</guilabel> checkbox, so that it is
+      empty.  Enter the <guilabel>IP Address</guilabel> and the
+      appropriate <guilabel>Netmask</guilabel> for the interface.  Then
+      select <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.
     </para>
 
     <para>