install-guide fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,1.5,1.6

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat May 14 22:35:29 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv28222

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 
Log Message:
1.  A few style edits - best first-draft work yet!
2.  Reminder: the GUI main menu now has both user preferences and
system settings under a "Desktop" menu



Index: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	12 May 2005 23:55:57 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	14 May 2005 22:35:27 -0000	1.6
@@ -1,66 +1,66 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
 
-<chapter id="ch-firewallconfig">
-  <title>Firewall Configuration</title>
+<chapter id="ch-security-config">
+  <title>Security Configuration</title>
 
   <para>
-    The default security configuration for &FC; will protect your system
+    The default security configuration for &FC; protects your system
     without restricting any of the functions of a desktop or laptop
-    computer.  If you are installing a server then you will need to
-    alter these settings in order to enable others to access the system.
+    computer.  If you are installing a server, you may need to alter
+    these settings so others can access the system.
   </para>
 
+  <figure id="fig-firewall">
+    <title>Security Configuration Screen</title>
+    <mediaobject>
+      <imageobject>
+	<imagedata fileref="./figs/firewall.eps" format="EPS"/>
+      </imageobject>
+      <imageobject>
+	<imagedata fileref="./figs/firewall.png" format="PNG"/>
+      </imageobject>
+      <textobject>
+	<para>
+	  Security configuration screen.
+	</para>
+      </textobject>
+    </mediaobject>
+  </figure>
+
   <para>
-    Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed after you have reviewed
-    the security configuration and made any necessary changes.
+    Select <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed after you review the
+    security configuration and make any necessary changes.
   </para>
 
-
-  <sect1 id="s1-firewall-settings">
+  <section id="sn-firewall-settings">
     <title>Firewall</title>
 
     <para>
-      The firewall built into Linux checks every incoming and outgoing
-      network connection between your machine and another against a set
-      of rules. These rules specify which types of connections are
-      permitted and which are denied.
+      The <indexterm>
+	<primary>firewall</primary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>firewall</firstterm> built into &FC;
+      checks every incoming and outgoing network connection on your
+      machine against a set of rules. These rules specify which types of
+      connections are permitted and which are denied.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       By default the firewall is enabled, with a simple set of rules
       that allow connections to be made from your system to others, but
-      block incoming connections from other systems.  You can then
-      choose to allow access to specific network services on your &FC;
-      system.
+      block incoming connections from other systems.  By making changes
+      on this screen, you can allow access to specific network services
+      on your &FED; system.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       To enable access to services listed on this screen, click the
-      checkbox next to the name of the service.  After the installation
-      is complete you can enable access to other services as well.
+      checkbox next to the service name.  After installation is
+      complete, you can enable access to other services as well.
     </para>
 
-
-    <figure id="fig-firewall">
-      <title>Firewall Configuration Screen</title>
-      <mediaobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/firewall.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/firewall.png" format="PNG"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<textobject>
-	  <para>
-	    Firewall configuration screen.
-	  </para>
-	</textobject>
-      </mediaobject>
-    </figure>
-
     <para>
-      Avoid disabling the firewall.  If you believe that it is necessary
-      to do so, then select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
+      Avoid disabling the firewall.  If you believe it is necessary to
+      do so, however, select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
     </para>
 
     <tip>
@@ -68,51 +68,62 @@
       <para>
 	To change these settings later, use the
 	<application>system-config-securitylevel</application> utility.
-	From the main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
-	    Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Security Level and
-	    Firewall</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+	From the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Security
+	    Level and Firewall</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
       </para>   
     </tip>
 
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-selinux">
+  <section id="sn-selinux">
     <title>&SEL;</title>
 
     <para>
-      The &SEL; (Security Enhanced Linux) framework that is part of &FC;
-      limits the actions of both users and programs by enforcing defined
-      security policies throughout the operating system.  Software bugs
-      or configuration changes can render a system vulnerable, and the
-      restrictions imposed by the &SEL; policies provide an extra line
-      of defense.
+      The <indexterm>
+	<primary>&SEL;</primary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>&SEL;</firstterm> (Security Enhanced
+      Linux) framework is part of &FC;. &SEL; limits the actions of both
+      users and programs by enforcing security policies throughout the
+      operating system. Without &SEL; software bugs or configuration
+      changes can render a system more vulnerable.  The restrictions
+      imposed by &SEL; policies provide an extra line of defense.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      An inflexible set of &SEL; policies could also inhibit many normal
-      activities.  For this reason &FC; uses targeted policies, which
-      only affect specific network services.  These services cannot
-      perform actions that are not part of their normal functions.  This
-      means that &SEL; can be <guilabel>Active</guilabel> without
-      causing users any inconvenience.
+      Inflexible &SEL; policies might inhibit many normal activities on
+      a &FED; system. For this reason, &FC; uses targeted policies,
+      which only affect specific network services.  These services
+      cannot perform actions that are not part of their normal
+      functions.  This means that &SEL; can be active without causing
+      users any inconvenience.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      To use the targeted &SEL; policy on your &FED; system, set the
+      &SEL; mode to <guilabel>Active</guilabel>.  This is the default
+      mode for &FED; installations.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      As &SEL; is a new technology, a diagnostic mode is provided.  If
-      you set &SEL; to <guilabel>Warn</guilabel> then the system is
-      configured, but any breach of security policies will merely cause
-      an error message to appear.  No activities are actually prohibited
-      when &SEL; is installed in this mode.  You can make &SEL; fully
-      active at a later time.
+      Because &SEL; is a new technology, a diagnostic mode is provided.
+      If you set &SEL; to <guilabel>Warn</guilabel>, the system is
+      configured, but any breach of security policies only causes an
+      error message to appear.  No activities are actually prohibited
+      when &SEL; is installed in this mode.  You may change the &SEL;
+      mode to active at any time after booting.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      If you choose to have &SEL; <guilabel>Disabled</guilabel> then the
-      access control system will not be configured at all.  To make
-      &SEL; active later you should use the
-      <application>system-config-securitylevel</application> utility.
+      If you choose the <guilabel>Disabled</guilabel> mode for &SEL;,
+      &FED; does not configure the access control system at all.  To
+      make &SEL; active later, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+	<guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	<guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	<guimenuitem>Security Level and Firewall</guimenuitem>
+      </menuchoice>.
     </para>
 
     <tip>
@@ -121,13 +132,18 @@
 	&SEL; is unique in that it cannot be bypassed, even by the
 	system administrators.  You can configure the behavior of &SEL;
 	with the <application>system-config-securitylevel</application>
-	utility.  From the main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
-	    Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Security Level and
-	    Firewall</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+	utility.  From the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Security Level and Firewall</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
+
+
+
 </chapter>
 
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