install-guide fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.5, 1.6

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	11 May 2005 23:48:36 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	15 May 2005 17:15:27 -0000	1.6
@@ -4,15 +4,11 @@
   <title>Installing Packages</title>
 
   <para>
-    The progress of the installation is reported on screen.  Network and
-    DVD installations do not require any action.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    If you are using CDs to install &FC; you will be prompted to change
-    discs periodically.  After inserting a disc allow two or three
-    seconds for the CD to be detected, before clicking
-    <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
+    &FED; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
+    the selected packages to your system.  Network and DVD installations
+    require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FED;
+    prompts you to change discs periodically. After you insert a disc,
+    select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
   </para>
 
   <figure id="fig-installing-inprogress">
@@ -33,16 +29,16 @@
   </figure>
     
   <para>
-    Click <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> to restart your computer once
-    the installation has completed.  Discs are automatically ejected
-    before the computer reboots.
+    After installation completes, select <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton>
+    to restart your computer.  &FED; ejects any loaded discs before the
+    computer reboots.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    The first time that your computer loads &FC;, you are presented with
-    a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen and given the opportunity to
-    configure various aspects of your new system.  This process is
-    explained in the next section.
+    The first time you boot &FC;, a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen
+    appears.  &FED; now allows you to perform additional configuration
+    of your new system.  Refer to <xref linkend="ch-firstboot" /> for
+    more information.
   </para>
 
 </chapter>