install-guide fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,1.6,1.7

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 15 18:37:48 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

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--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	13 May 2005 22:43:58 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	15 May 2005 18:37:46 -0000	1.7
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
 
 <chapter id="ch-firstboot">
-  <title>On First Boot</title>
+  <title>First Boot</title>
 
   <para>
     The <application>Setup Agent</application> launches the first time
-    that you start a new &FED; system.  This enables you to configure
-    the system for use before logging in.
+    that you start a new &FED; system.  Use <application>Setup
+      Agent</application> to configure the system for use before logging
+    in.
   </para>
 
   <figure id="fig-fboot-welcome">
@@ -27,30 +28,35 @@
   </figure>
 
   <para>
-    Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to start the <application>Setup Agent</application>.
+    Select <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to start the <application>Setup
+      Agent</application>.
   </para>
 
   <note>
-    <title>The <application>Setup Agent</application> requires a graphical interface</title>
+    <title>GUI Required</title>
     <para>
-      You must manually carry out these configuration tasks if the Setup
-      Agent cannot run.
+      <application>Setup Agent</application> requires a graphical
+      interface.  If none is available, configure these options manually
+      after you log in.
     </para>
   </note>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-firstboot-licence">
+  <section id="sn-firstboot-licence">
     <title>License Agreement</title>
 
     <para>
-      This screen displays the overall licensing terms for &FC;.
-      Individual software packages are covered by their own licenses.
-      Every software product included in &FC; uses a license that has
-      been approved by the Open Source Initiative (OSI).
+      This screen displays the overall licensing terms for &FC;. Each
+      software package in &FC; is covered by its own license which has
+      been approved by the <indexterm>
+	<primary>OSI (Open Source Initiative)</primary>
+      </indexterm> Open Source Initiative (OSI).  For more information
+      about the OSI, refer to <ulink
+	url="http://www.opensource.org/">http://www.opensource.org/</ulink>.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-fboot-licence">
-      <title>Licence Agreement Screen</title>
+      <title>License Agreement Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
 	<imageobject>
 	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/fboot-licence.eps" format="EPS"/>
@@ -68,20 +74,25 @@
 
     <para>
       To proceed, select <guilabel>Yes, I agree to the License
-	Agreement</guilabel> and click <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
+	Agreement</guilabel> and then select
+      <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
     </para>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-firstboot-datetime">
+  <section id="sn-firstboot-datetime">
     <title>Date and Time</title>
 
     <para>
-      To configure a system that does not have Internet access, manually
-      set the date and time for your system at this screen.  If your
-      system has network access, use NTP (Network Time Protocol) servers
-      to maintain the accuracy of the clock.
+      If your system does not have Internet access or a network time
+      server, manually set the date and time for your system on this
+      screen.  Otherwise, use <indexterm>
+	<primary>NTP (Network Time Protocol)</primary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>NTP</firstterm> (Network Time Protocol)
+      servers to maintain the accuracy of the clock.  NTP provides time
+      synchronization service to computers on the same network.  The
+      Internet contains many computers that offer public NTP services.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -112,25 +123,28 @@
     </para>
 
     <tip>
-      <title>Changing the clock</title>
+      <title>Setting the Clock</title>
       <para>
-      To change these settings later, use the
-	<application>system-config-date</application> utility.  From the
-	main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
-	    Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Date &
-	    Time</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+	To change these settings later, use the <application>Date/Time
+	  Properties</application> utility.  From the main menu, choose
+	<menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Date & Time</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
 
 
-    <sect2 id="s2-firstboot-ntp">
+    <section id="sn-firstboot-ntp">
       <title>Network Time Protocol</title>
 
       <para>
-	To configure your system to use network time servers you must
-	<guilabel>Enable Network Time Protocol</guilabel>.  This
-	disables the settings on the <guilabel>Date and Time</guilabel>
-	tab and allows you to access to the other settings on this screen.
+	To configure your system to use network time servers, select the
+	<guilabel>Enable Network Time Protocol</guilabel> option.  This
+	option disables the settings on the <guilabel>Date and
+	  Time</guilabel> tab and enables the other settings on this
+	screen.
       </para>
 
       <figure id="fig-fboot-time-ntp">
@@ -151,47 +165,49 @@
       </figure>
 
       <para>
-	By default &FC; is configured to use three separate clusters, or
-	pools, of time servers.  Having more than one NTP provider
-	enables your system to choose the most accurate, or switch to
-	using another server for time synchronization if the first
-	becomes unavailable.
+	By default &FC; is configured to use three separate groups, or
+	<firstterm>pools</firstterm>, of time servers.  Time server
+	pools create redundancy, so if one time server is unavailable,
+	your system will synchronize with another server.
       </para>
 
-      <para> To use an additional time server either select it from the
+      <para>
+	To use an additional time server, either select it from the
 	<guilabel>Server</guilabel> drop-down box, or type the DNS name
-	in the box, and <guilabel>Add</guilabel>.  To remove a server or
-	server pool from the list, select the name and click
+	in the box, and select <guilabel>Add</guilabel>.  To remove a
+	server or server pool from the list, select the name and click
 	<guilabel>Delete</guilabel>.  The drop-down box already has two
 	listings as examples, which are servers provided by &RH;.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	If the hardware clock in your computer is highly inaccurate you
-	may also wish to remove the option to <guilabel>Use Local Time
-	  Source</guilabel>, under <guilabel>Show advanced
-	  options</guilabel>.  This ensures that the NTP servers take
-	priority over the internal clock.
+	If the hardware clock in your computer is highly inaccurate, you
+	may turn off your local time source entirely.  To turn off the
+	local time source, select <guilabel>Show advanced
+	  options</guilabel> and then deselect the <guilabel>Use Local
+	  Time Source</guilabel> option.  If you turn off your local
+	time source, the NTP servers take priority over the internal
+	clock.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	The <guilabel>Enable NTP Broadcast</guilabel> advanced option
-	causes your system to attempt to automatically locate time
-	servers available on the network.
+	If you enable the <guilabel>Enable NTP Broadcast</guilabel>
+	advanced option, &FED; will attempt to automatically locate time
+	servers on the network.
       </para>
 
-    </sect2>
+    </section>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-firstboot-systemuser">
+  <section id="sn-firstboot-systemuser">
     <title>System User</title>
 
     <para>
-      You create a user account for yourself with this screen.  Always
-      use this account to log in to your &FC; system, rather than using
-      the root account.
+      Create a user account for yourself with this screen.  Always use
+      this account to log in to your &FC; system, rather than using the
+      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> account.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-fboot-user">
@@ -212,11 +228,11 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      Enter a <guilabel>Username</guilabel> and your <guilabel>Full
-	Name</guilabel>, then enter your chosen
-      <guilabel>Password</guilabel> and type it once more in the
-      <guilabel>Confirm Password</guilabel> box to ensure that it is
-      correct.
+      Enter a user name and your full name, and then enter your chosen
+      password.  Type your password once more in the <guilabel>Confirm
+	Password</guilabel> box to ensure that it is correct.  Refer to
+      <xref linkend="ch-rootpassword" /> for guidelines on selecting a
+      secure password.
     </para>
 
     <tip>
@@ -224,17 +240,19 @@
       <para>
       To add additional user accounts to your system after the
 	installation is complete, use the
-	<application>system-config-users</application> utility.  From
-	the main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
-	    Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Users &
-	    Groups</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+	<application>User Manager</application> utility.  From
+	the main menu, chose <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Users & Groups</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
 
     <para>
-      To configure your system to use network services for
-      authentication or user information, click <guibutton>Use Network
-	Login...</guibutton>. Network authentication is explained in a
+      To configure &FED; to use network services for authentication or
+      user information, select <guibutton>Use Network
+	Login...</guibutton>.  Network authentication is explained in a
       separate tutorial.
     </para>
 
@@ -243,17 +261,18 @@
       <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
     </para>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-firstboot-display">
+  <section id="sn-firstboot-display">
     <title>Display</title>
 
     <para>
       The <application>Setup Agent</application> automatically attempts
-      to identify the graphics card and monitor for your computer.  It also uses
-      this information to calculate the correct
-      <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> and <guilabel>Color Depth</guilabel> settings.
+      to identify the graphics card and monitor for your computer.  It
+      also uses this information to calculate the correct
+      <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> and <guilabel>Color
+	Depth</guilabel> settings.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-fboot-display">
@@ -274,15 +293,15 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      To change the selected monitor, click
-      <guilabel>Configure</guilabel>.  This displays a list of
-      manufacturers.  Find the manufacturer of your monitor on the list
-      and click the disclosure triangle next to the name of the
-      manufacturer to view the models of monitor.  Select the correct
-      model from the list and click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.  If none
-      of the listed models match your monitor, select the closest match
-      from either the <guilabel>Generic CRT Display</guilabel> list or
-      the <guilabel>Generic LCD Display</guilabel> list.
+      If you need to change the monitor, select
+      <guilabel>Configure</guilabel> to display a list of manufacturers.
+      Select the manufacturer of your monitor on the list and hit
+      <keycap>+</keycap> or select the triangle next to the name to view
+      supported models.  Select the correct model from the list and
+      click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.  If none of the listed models
+      match your monitor, select the closest match from either the
+      <guilabel>Generic CRT Display</guilabel> list or the
+      <guilabel>Generic LCD Display</guilabel> list.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-fboot-display-monitor">
@@ -303,27 +322,30 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      To change a display setting, click
+      To change a display setting, select
       <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> or <guilabel>Color
-      Depth</guilabel>, and select a new value from the drop-down list.  The
-      <application>Setup Agent</application> only shows the settings
-      that are valid for your hardware.
+	Depth</guilabel>, and select a new value from the drop-down
+      list.  The <application>Setup Agent</application> only shows the
+      settings that are valid for your hardware.
     </para>
 
     <tip>
       <title>Resetting the display</title>
       <para>
       To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed,
-	use the <application>system-config-display</application>
-	utility.  From the main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
-	Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+	use the <application>Display Settings</application>
+	utility.  From the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-firstboot-soundcard">
+  <section id="sn-firstboot-soundcard">
     <title>Sound Card</title>
 
     <para>
@@ -349,41 +371,58 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-       Click <guibutton>Play Test Sound</guibutton>.  If you hear a
-       series of three sounds then your system has been configured
-       successfully.  If your sound card is identified but you do not
-       hear these sounds, check your speakers and try again.
+      Click <guibutton>Play Test Sound</guibutton> to check the sound
+      card configuration.  If the configuration is correct, &FED; plays
+      a sound sequence.  If your sound card is identified, but you do
+      not hear the sound, check your speakers and try again.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       You can manually configure a &FED; system to use unsupported sound
-      cards after the installation process is complete.  Manual hardware
-      configuration is beyond the scope of this document. 
+      cards after the installation process is complete.  Manual sound
+      hardware configuration, however, is beyond the scope of this
+      document. 
     </para>
 
     <tip>
-      <title>Changing the sound card</title>
+      <title>Changing the Sound Card</title>
       <para>
-      Use the <application>system-config-soundcard</application> utility
-	to redetect your current sound card, if it is not automatically
-	configured after a change of hardware.  From the main menu, choose
-	<menuchoice><guimenu>System
-	Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Soundcard Detection</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+      Use the <application>Audio Devices</application> utility to
+	redetect your current sound card, if it is not automatically
+	configured after a change of hardware.  From the main menu,
+	choose <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Soundcard Detection</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-firstboot-additional-cds">
+  <section id="sn-firstboot-additional-cds">
     <title>Additional CDs</title>
 
     <para>
-      This screen enables you to load prepared discs for installing
-      third-party software.  It cannot be used for installing additional
-      packages from the &FC; discs.
+      This screen allows you to load prepared discs for installing
+      third-party software.  You cannot use it, however, to install
+      additional packages from the &FC; discs.
     </para>
 
+    <tip>
+      <title>Adding Software</title>
+      <para>
+	To add software packages from the &FC; discs, use the
+	<application>Package Manager</application> utility after you log
+	in.  From the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Add/Remove Applications</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>.
+      </para>
+    </tip>
+
     <figure id="fig-fboot-cds">
       <title>Additional CDs Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
@@ -402,7 +441,7 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to move on to the final screen.
+      Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed to the final screen.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-fboot-finish">
@@ -423,11 +462,11 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed to the login
-      screen. Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
+      Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen.
+      Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
     </para>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 </chapter>
 




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