install-guide fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9 fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml, 1.6, 1.7

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19908/install-guide

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml 
Log Message:
2d wave style editing and added indexing


Index: fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml	14 May 2005 21:49:44 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml	20 May 2005 01:22:31 -0000	1.9
@@ -5,16 +5,19 @@
   <para>
     A <firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> is a small program that reads
     and launches the operating system. &FED; uses the
-    <application>GRUB</application> boot loader by default.
+    <application>GRUB</application> boot loader by default.  If you have
+    multiple operating systems, the boot loader determines which one to
+    boot, usually by offering a menu.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    You may have a boot loader installed on your system already.  If
-    your boot loader does not recognize Linux partitions, you may not be
-    able to boot &FED;.  Use <application>GRUB</application> as your
-    boot loader to boot Linux and most other operating systems.  Follow
-    the directions in this section to install
-    <application>GRUB</application>.
+    You may have a boot loader installed on your system already.  An
+    operating system may install its own preferred boot loader, or you
+    may have installed a third-party boot loader.If your boot loader
+    does not recognize Linux partitions, you may not be able to boot
+    &FED;.  Use <application>GRUB</application> as your boot loader to
+    boot Linux and most other operating systems.  Follow the directions
+    in this section to install <application>GRUB</application>.
   </para>
 
   <warning>


Index: fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	13 May 2005 00:04:02 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	20 May 2005 01:22:31 -0000	1.7
@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@
 
   <para>
     The installation system automatically detects any existing
-    installation of &FC;.  The upgrade process updates the existing &FC;
-    or &RHL; software with new versions.  The process does not remove
-    any data from users' home directories.  The existing partition
-    structure on your hard drives does not change.  Your system
-    configuration changes only if a package upgrade demands it.  Most
-    package upgrades do not change system configuration, but rather
-    install an additional configuration file for you to examine later.
+    installation of &FC;.  The upgrade process updates the existing
+    system software with new versions, but does not remove any data from
+    users' home directories.  The existing partition structure on your
+    hard drives does not change.  Your system configuration changes only
+    if a package upgrade demands it.  Most package upgrades do not
+    change system configuration, but rather install an additional
+    configuration file for you to examine later.
   </para>
 
   <section id="sn-upgrade-examine">
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
       <para>
 	Software which you have installed manually on your existing &FC;
 	or &RHL; system may behave differently after an upgrade.  You
-	may manually recompile this software after an upgrade to ensure
-	it performs correctly on the updated system.
+	may need to manually recompile this software after an upgrade to
+	ensure it performs correctly on the updated system.
       </para>
     </note>
 
@@ -61,13 +61,17 @@
     <title>Upgrading Boot Loader Configuration</title>
 
     <para>
-      Your completed &FC; installation must be registered in the
-      <firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> to boot properly.  A boot
-      loader is software on your machine that locates and starts the
-      operating system.  If you have multiple operating systems, the
-      boot loader determines which one to boot, usually by offering a
-      menu.  An operating system may install its own preferred boot
-      loader, or you may have installed a third-party boot loader.
+      <indexterm>
+	<primary>boot loader</primary>
+	<secondary>upgrading</secondary>
+      </indexterm> Your completed &FC; installation must be registered
+      in the <indexterm>
+	<primary>boot loader</primary>
+	<seealso>GRUB</seealso>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> to boot properly.
+      A boot loader is software on your machine that locates and starts
+      the operating system.  Refer to <xref linkend="ch-bootloader" />
+      for more information about boot loaders.
     </para>
 
 
@@ -116,12 +120,12 @@
 
     <para>
       Install a new boot loader as part of an upgrade process only if
-      you are certain that you wish to replace the existing boot loader.
-      If you install a new boot loader, you may not be able to boot
-      other operating systems on the same machine until you have
-      configured the new boot loader. Select <guilabel>Create new boot
-	loader configuration</guilabel> to remove the existing boot
-      loader and install GRUB.
+      you are certain you want to replace the existing boot loader. If
+      you install a new boot loader, you may not be able to boot other
+      operating systems on the same machine until you have configured
+      the new boot loader. Select <guilabel>Create new boot loader
+	configuration</guilabel> to remove the existing boot loader and
+      install GRUB.
     </para>
 
     <para>