install-guide fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.6, 1.7 fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri May 20 02:03:39 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv20915

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 
Log Message:
2d round style edits and more precise (?) tagging


Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	13 May 2005 22:03:32 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	20 May 2005 02:03:37 -0000	1.7
@@ -61,12 +61,11 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	Next, select the drive(s) you wish to use for Linux partitions.
-	If your system contains only one disk, that disk is
-	automatically selected.  Any drives you select are used for
-	Linux partitions according to the option selected above.  The
-	option selection is global, and you may not select a different
-	option for each disk.
+	Next, select any disks you wish to use for Linux partitions. If
+	your system contains only one disk, that disk is automatically
+	selected.  Any disks you select are used for Linux partitions
+	according to the option selected above.  The option selection is
+	global, and you may not select a different option for each disk.
       </para>
 
       <note>
@@ -84,10 +83,9 @@
       </para>
       <para>
 	If you remove any existing partitions, the installation program
-	asks you to confirm this choice.  Once you have reviewed and
-	approve of the partition configuration, select
-	<guibutton>Next</guibutton> to continue to the next installation
-	step.  Proceed with <xref
+	asks you to confirm this choice.  After you review and approve
+	the partition configuration, select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>
+	to continue to the next installation step.  Proceed with <xref
 	  linkend="ch-bootloader"/>.
       </para>
 
@@ -99,8 +97,8 @@
       <para>
 	To manually set up all disk partitions, choose
 	<guilabel>Manually partition with Disk Druid</guilabel>.  Choose
-	this method if you require a special partition configuration.  If
-	you are familiar with how disk partitions and the Linux file
+	this method if you require a special partition configuration.
+	If you are familiar with how disk partitions and the Linux file
 	system work, move on to <xref linkend="sn-disk-druid"/>.
 	Otherwise, read <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/>.
       </para>
@@ -150,12 +148,16 @@
       partition.  A file system allows a Linux system to more
       effectively organize, search, and retrieve files.  The most common
       partition type for &FED; is <indexterm>
-	<primary>ext3</primary>
+	<primary><systemitem
+	    class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem></primary>
 	<see>file system</see>
       </indexterm><indexterm>
 	<primary>file system</primary>
-	<secondary>ext3</secondary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>ext3</firstterm>.  The ext3 file system
+	<secondary
+	  sortas="filesystem"><systemitem>ext3</systemitem></secondary>
+      </indexterm> <systemitem
+	class="filesystem"><firstterm>ext3</firstterm></systemitem>.
+      The <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> file system
       provides more robust features for preventing data loss.  Most
       &FED; administrators choose this type for data partitions.
     </para>
@@ -163,8 +165,8 @@
       Most partitions have a <indexterm>
 	<primary>mount point</primary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>mount point</firstterm>.  The mount point
-      indicates the directory whose contents reside on that partition.  A
-      partition with no mount point is not accessible by users.  Data
+      indicates the directory whose contents reside on that partition.
+      A partition with no mount point is not accessible by users.  Data
       not located on any other partition resides in the
       <filename>/</filename> (or <indexterm>
 	<primary>partition</primary>
@@ -235,18 +237,20 @@
     <title>Disk Druid</title>
 
     <para>
-      <application><firstterm>Disk Druid</firstterm></application>
-      <indexterm>
+      <indexterm> 
 	<primary>Disk Druid</primary>
-      </indexterm> is an interactive program for editing disk
-      partitions.  Users run it only within the &FC; installation
-      system.  Disk Druid supports advanced technologies such as
-      <firstterm>RAID</firstterm> <indexterm>
+      </indexterm> <application><firstterm>Disk
+	  Druid</firstterm></application> is an interactive program for
+      editing disk partitions.  Users run it only within the &FC;
+      installation system.  Disk Druid supports advanced technologies
+      such as
+       <indexterm>
 	<primary>RAID</primary>
-      </indexterm> and <firstterm>LVM</firstterm>, <indexterm>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>RAID</firstterm> and
+      <indexterm>
 	<primary>LVM</primary>
-      </indexterm> which provide more extensible and reliable data
-      storage.
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>LVM</firstterm>, which provide more
+      extensible and reliable data storage.
     </para>
     <para>
       <application>Disk Druid</application> displays the following
@@ -267,14 +271,18 @@
 	    Indicate a size in megabytes for the partition.
 	  </para>
 	  <note>
-	    <title>Some Partitions Not Allowed</title>
+	    <title>Illegal Partitions</title>
 	    <para>
-	      The <filename>/bin</filename>, <filename>/dev</filename>,
-	      <filename>/etc</filename>, <filename>/lib</filename>,
-	      <filename>/proc</filename>, <filename>/root</filename>,
-	      and <filename>/sbin</filename> directories may not be used
-	      for separate partitions in <application>Disk
-		Druid</application>.  These directories reside on the
+	      <indexterm>
+		<primary>partition</primary>
+		<secondary>illegal</secondary>
+	      </indexterm> The <filename>/bin</filename>,
+	      <filename>/dev</filename>, <filename>/etc</filename>,
+	      <filename>/lib</filename>, <filename>/proc</filename>,
+	      <filename>/root</filename>, and <filename>/sbin</filename>
+	      directories may not be used for separate partitions in
+	      <application>Disk Druid</application>.  These directories
+	      reside on the
 	      <indexterm>
 		<primary>partition</primary>
 		<secondary>root</secondary>
@@ -305,7 +313,7 @@
 	      <term><guilabel>Fixed size</guilabel></term>
 	      <listitem>
 		<para>
-		  Use a fixed size, as close to your entry as possible.
+		  Use a fixed size as close to your entry as possible.
 		</para>
 	      </listitem>
 	    </varlistentry>
@@ -329,7 +337,7 @@
 	    </varlistentry>
 	  </variablelist>
 	  <note>
-	    <title>Partition sizes</title>
+	    <title>Partition Sizes</title>
 	    <para>
 	      The actual partition on the disk may be slightly smaller
 	      or larger than your choice.  Disk geometry issues cause
@@ -390,22 +398,31 @@
 	    <para>
 	      You may not label Windows partitions that use the
 	      <indexterm>
-		<primary>NTFS</primary>
+		<primary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem></primary>
 		<see>file system</see>
 	      </indexterm>
 	      <indexterm>
 		<primary>file system</primary>
-		<secondary>NTFS</secondary>
-	      </indexterm> NTFS file system with a mount point in the
-	      &FC; installer.  You may label <indexterm>
-		<primary>vfat</primary>
+		<secondary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem></secondary>
+	      </indexterm> <systemitem
+		class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem> file system with a
+	      mount point in the &FC; installer.  You may label
+	      <indexterm>
+		<primary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></primary>
 		<see>file system</see>
 	      </indexterm>
 	      <indexterm>
 		<primary>file system</primary>
-		<secondary>vfat</secondary>
-	      </indexterm> <firstterm>vfat</firstterm> (FAT-16 or
-	      FAT-32) partitions with a mount point.
+		<secondary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></secondary>
+	      </indexterm> <systemitem
+		class="filesystem"><firstterm>vfat</firstterm></systemitem> 
+	      (<systemitem class="filesystem">FAT16</systemitem> or
+	      <systemitem class="filesystem">FAT32</systemitem>)
+	      partitions with a mount point.
 	    </para>
 	  </note>
 	  <para>
@@ -543,10 +560,10 @@
 	    You may not remove a physical volume from a volume group if
 	    doing so would leave insufficient space for that group's
 	    logical volumes.  Take, for example, a volume group made up
-	    of two 5 GB LVM physical volume partitions, which contains an
-	    8 GB logical volume.  The installer would not allow you to
-	    remove either of the component physical volumes, since that
-	    would leave only 5 GB in the group for an 8 GB logical
+	    of two 5 GB LVM physical volume partitions, which contains
+	    an 8 GB logical volume.  The installer would not allow you
+	    to remove either of the component physical volumes, since
+	    that would leave only 5 GB in the group for an 8 GB logical
 	    volume.  If you reduce the total size of any logical volumes
 	    appropriately, you may then remove a physical volume from
 	    the volume group.


Index: fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml	12 May 2005 22:27:31 -0000	1.4
+++ fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml	20 May 2005 02:03:37 -0000	1.5
@@ -4,15 +4,17 @@
   <title>Installation Types</title>
 
   <para>
-    An <firstterm>installation type</firstterm> is a label that roughly
-    describes how you will use your &FED; system.  Several installation
-    types are already defined in the &FC; installation program. Choose
-    the appropriate installation type to streamline the installation
-    process if you are a beginner.  The installation program makes some
-    choices for you based on the type you select. These choices include
-    partitioning of your hard disks, and software packages to be
-    installed.  All installation types allow you to customize these
-    selections.
+    An <indexterm>
+      <primary>installation type</primary>
+    </indexterm> <firstterm>installation type</firstterm> is a label
+    that roughly describes how you will use your &FED; system.  Several
+    installation types are already defined in the &FC; installation
+    program. Choose the appropriate installation type to streamline the
+    installation process if you are a beginner.  The installation
+    program makes some choices for you based on the type you select.
+    These choices include partitioning of your hard disks, and software
+    packages to be installed.  All installation types allow you to
+    customize these selections.
   </para>
 
   <section id="ch-choosing-installtype">
@@ -35,37 +37,55 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
 
-    <para>
-      The default installation type is a <guilabel>Personal
-	Desktop</guilabel>.  It provides a graphical working environment
-      with an office suite, Internet applications and multimedia
-      software.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      A <guilabel>Workstation</guilabel> installation includes the
-      software installed on a <guilabel>Personal Desktop</guilabel>, and
-      adds software for development and systems administration.  Choose
-      this installation type if you plan to compile software from source
-      code.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      A <guilabel>Server</guilabel> installation provides network
-      servers such as the Apache Web server and the Samba suite of
-      services, and administration tools.  The
-      <guilabel>Server</guilabel> installation type provides no
-      graphical environment by default.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      The <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> installation type does not provide
-      any disk partitioning layout for you.  It also does not include
-      any additional software beyond a <guilabel>Personal
-	Desktop</guilabel>. If you perform a <guilabel>Custom</guilabel>
-      installation, the installation program will present dialogs for
-      these selections during the installation process.
-    </para>
+    <variablelist>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Personal Desktop</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    This is the default installation type.  It provides a
+	    graphical working environment with an office suite, Internet
+	    applications and multimedia software.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Workstation</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    This installation type includes the software installed on a
+	    <guilabel>Personal Desktop</guilabel>, and adds software for
+	    development and systems administration.  Choose this
+	    installation type if you plan to compile software from
+	    source code.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Server</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    This installation type provides network servers such as the
+	    Apache Web server and the Samba suite of services, and
+	    administration tools.  This installation type provides no
+	    graphical environment by default.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Custom</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    This installation type does not provide any disk
+	    partitioning layout for you.  It also does not include any
+	    additional software beyond a <guilabel>Personal
+	      Desktop</guilabel>. If you perform a
+	    <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> installation, the installation
+	    program will present dialogs for these selections during the
+	    installation process.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
 
     <para>
       Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> once you have made a selection.
@@ -77,13 +97,54 @@
     <title>Special Considerations</title>
 
     <para>
-      All &FC; installations include email (SMTP), file sharing (NFS),
-      printing (CUPS) and remote login (SSH) services.  Some automated
-      processes on your &FED; system use the email service to send
-      reports and messages to the system administrator.  By default, the
-      email and printing services do not accept connections from other
-      systems.  If you want your &FED; system to function as an email or
-      print server, you may configure it after installation.
+      All &FC; installations include the following network services:
+    </para>
+
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  email through <indexterm>
+	    <primary>SMTP (Simple Mail Transfer Protocol)</primary>
+	  </indexterm> <firstterm>SMTP</firstterm> (Simple Mail Transfer
+	  Protocol)
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  <indexterm>
+	    <primary>NFS (Network File System)</primary>
+	    <secondary>service installed</secondary>
+	  </indexterm> network file sharing through NFS (Network File
+	  System)
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  <indexterm>
+	    <primary>CUPS (Common UNIX Printing System)</primary>
+	  </indexterm> printing through <firstterm>CUPS</firstterm>
+	  (Common UNIX Printing System)
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  <indexterm>
+	    <primary>SSH (Secure SHell)</primary>
+	  </indexterm> remote login through <firstterm>SSH</firstterm>
+	  (Secure SHell)
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
+
+    <para>
+      Some automated processes on your &FED; system use the email
+      service to send reports and messages to the system administrator.
+      By default, the email and printing services do not accept
+      connections from other systems.  Although &FED; connects to NFS
+      services on other systems, the NFS <emphasis>sharing</emphasis>
+      component is disabled by default.  You may configure your &FED;
+      system after installation to offer email, NFS or print services.
+      The SSH service is enabled by default.
     </para>
 
     <tip>
@@ -94,10 +155,9 @@
 	<guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel> screen, select the
 	<guilabel>Minimal</guilabel> package group.  The only services
 	included in a <guilabel>Minimal</guilabel> installation are
-	printing, email (SMTP), secure remote login (SSH), and network
-	file access (NFS).  This type of installation may be useful for
-	firewalls or other specialized systems on which limited service
-	is an advantage.
+	email, printing, NFS, and SSH.  This type of installation may be
+	useful for firewalls or other specialized systems on which
+	limited service is an advantage.
       </para>
     </tip>
 


Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	18 May 2005 23:37:30 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	20 May 2005 02:03:37 -0000	1.9
@@ -58,11 +58,14 @@
     <title>Installation from a Network Server</title>
 
     <para>
-      You may install &FC; from a network server using FTP, HTTP, or NFS
-      protocols.  <!-- These installation methods require a properly
-      configured server.  Setting up an installation server is detailed
-      in a separate tutorial. [This comment can be removed when the
-      tutorial exists. - PWF.] -->
+      You may install &FC; from a network server using FTP, HTTP, or
+      <indexterm>
+	<primary>NFS (Network File System)</primary>
+	<secondary>install from</secondary>
+      </indexterm> NFS protocols.  <!-- These installation methods
+      require a properly configured server.  Setting up an installation
+      server is detailed in a separate tutorial. [This comment can be
+      removed when the tutorial exists. - PWF.] -->
     </para>
 
 




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