install-guide fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,1.8,1.9

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1673

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 
Log Message:
2nd round of style editing - ensure consistent tense and title style



Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	17 May 2005 00:03:26 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	22 May 2005 13:47:14 -0000	1.9
@@ -7,13 +7,10 @@
     &FED; uses the installation type to select a set of software
     packages for your system.  Refer to <xref linkend="ch-installtypes"
     /> for more information.  You can accept this default set of
-    packages, or customize it to fit your preferences.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    If you chose the <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> installation type,
-    &FED; displays the screen for <guilabel>Package Group
-      Selection</guilabel> automatically.
+    packages, or customize it to fit your preferences.  If you choose
+    the <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> installation type, &FED; displays
+    the screen for <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel>
+    automatically.
   </para>
 
   <tip>
@@ -103,8 +100,8 @@
     <para>
       The default groups for the chosen installation type are already
       selected.  Select or remove any group of packages as desired.
-      <emphasis>No</emphasis> packages from a group will be installed
-      unless the checkbox next to the group is selected.
+      <emphasis>None</emphasis> of the packages from a group will be
+      installed unless the checkbox next to the group is selected.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -118,7 +115,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      &FED; lists with each group is the number of packages currently
+      &FED; lists with each group the number of packages currently
       selected for installation, and the total number of packages within
       that group.
     </para>
@@ -155,11 +152,11 @@
     </para>
 
     <warning>
-      <title>Language Selection Is Permanent</title>
+      <title>Language Selection</title>
       <para>
-        Be sure to include every language that may be needed for your system.
-        Adding additional languages after the installation is completed
-        is neither supported nor recommended.
+        Be sure to include every language that may be needed for your
+	system. Adding additional languages after installation is
+	difficult, and not recommended.
       </para>
     </warning>
 
@@ -167,7 +164,8 @@
 
 
   <section id="sn-extreme-packagegroups">
-    <title>Everything or Minimal Installations</title>
+    <title><guilabel>Everything</guilabel> or
+      <guilabel>Minimal</guilabel> Installations</title>
 
     <para>
       Two of the groups under the heading of
@@ -177,12 +175,11 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>,
-      <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided with &FC; will
-      be installed.  Although many additional network services are
-      installed, however, some will not be enabled after installation.
-      This option may be useful for some testing and development
-      purposes.
+      If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>, &FED; installs
+      <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided.  Although &FED;
+      installs many additional network services in this package group,
+      some are not enabled after installation. This option may be useful
+      for some testing and development purposes.
     </para>
 
     <caution>
@@ -203,10 +200,10 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      After you have selected the desired packages, select
+      After you choose the desired packages, select
       <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed.  &FED; checks your
       selection, and automatically adds any extra packages required to
-      use the software you have selected.
+      use the software you select.
     </para>
 
   </section>