install-guide fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,1.6,1.7

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1693

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml 
Log Message:
2nd round style edit



Index: fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	15 May 2005 16:11:11 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	22 May 2005 13:53:07 -0000	1.7
@@ -3,21 +3,25 @@
 <chapter id="ch-abouttoinstall">
   <title>About to Install</title>
     
-  <warning>
-    <title>Last Chance to Abort</title>
-    <para>
-      No changes are made to your computer until you click the
-      <guilabel>Next</guilabel> button.  If you abort the installation
-      process after that point, the &FC; system will be incomplete and
-      unusable.
-    </para>
-  </warning>
- 
   <para>
-    You may return to previous screens to alter any details by selecting
-    <guilabel>Back</guilabel>.
+    No changes are made to your computer until you click the
+    <guilabel>Next</guilabel> button.  If you abort the installation
+    process after that point, the &FED; system will be incomplete and
+    unusable.  To return to previous screens to make different choices,
+    select <guilabel>Back</guilabel>.  To abort the installation, turn
+    off the computer.
   </para>
 
+  <important>
+    <title>Aborting Installation</title>
+    <para>
+      In certain situations, you may be unable to return to previous
+      screens.  &FED; notifies you of this restriction and allows you to
+      abort the installation program.  You may reboot with the
+      installation media to start over.
+    </para>
+  </important>
+
   <figure id="fig-about-to-install">
     <title>About to Install Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
@@ -29,7 +33,7 @@
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
         <para>
-	  About to install... screen.
+	  About to install screen.
         </para>
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>