release-notes/FC4 splash.xml,1.6,1.7

Karsten Wade (kwade) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue May 31 23:20:19 UTC 2005


Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12159

Modified Files:
	splash.xml 
Log Message:
Fixes bz#159172.  The Fedora Project should always be preceeded by the article 'the'.


Index: splash.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/splash.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- splash.xml	31 May 2005 04:11:14 -0000	1.6
+++ splash.xml	31 May 2005 23:20:17 -0000	1.7
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <section id="sn-splash">
   <title>Welcome to &FC; &LOCALVER;</title>
   <para>
-    &FC; is a completely free, user friendly, and secure general
-    purpose platform based on Linux. &FP; is an open source
-    project that pioneers leading edge technology and concepts
-    sponsored by &RH; and supported by the &FED; community.  Refer to
-    these webpages to find out more information about &FED;:
+    &FC; is a completely free, user friendly, and secure general purpose
+    platform based on Linux.  The &FP; is an open source project that
+    pioneers leading edge technology and concepts sponsored by &RH; and
+    supported by the &FED; community.  Refer to these webpages to find
+    out more information about &FED;:
   </para>
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>




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