install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,1.1,1.2

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4631/en

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 
Log Message:
Minor style edits only



Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 15:50:30 -0000	1.2
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
       specific <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>. All 32-bit PCs are
       based on the <firstterm>i386</firstterm> architecture. You may
       also install versions of &FC; on computers that are based on
-      <firstterm>x86_64</firstterm>, and <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>
+      <firstterm>x86_64</firstterm> or <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>
       technology. The architectures are explained below:
     </para>
 
@@ -116,26 +116,25 @@
     <title>Before You Begin</title>
 
     <para>
-      Before installing &FC; you will need access to the following
-      things:
+      Before you install &FC;, you need access to:
     </para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Boot or installation media (refer to
+          boot or installation media (refer to
           <xref
 	  linkend="sn-preparing-media"/> for more information)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Information about your network configuration
+          information about your network configuration
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          A copy of this &IG; and the Release Notes for this version of
+          a copy of this &IG; and the Release Notes for this version of
           &FC;
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -151,7 +150,7 @@
     <para>
       The Release Notes are available on the first disc in HTML and
       plain text format. The latest versions of this &IG; and the
-      Release Notes can always be found at &FDPDOCS-URL;.
+      Release Notes are available at &FDPDOCS-URL;.
     </para>
 
     <section id="sn-installing-network-configurations">
@@ -216,7 +215,7 @@
       <para>
         You may install &FC; using a <firstterm>mirror</firstterm>, a
         website or network server that provide a copy of the necessary
-        files. To use a mirror you will need to know the following:
+        files. To use a mirror, you need to know:
       </para>
 
       <itemizedlist>