install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Feb 10 15:56:58 UTC 2006


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4661/en

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
Log Message:
Style editing: my unfortunate tendency to erratically use future tense



Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 23:22:40 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 15:56:50 -0000	1.3
@@ -223,10 +223,10 @@
       administrators create both <filename>/usr</filename> and
       <filename>/usr/local</filename> partitions. In that case, files
       under <filename>/usr/local</filename>, such as
-      <filename>/usr/local/bin/foo</filename>, will be on the
+      <filename>/usr/local/bin/foo</filename>, are on the
       <filename>/usr/local</filename> partition. Any other files in
       <filename>/usr/</filename>, such as
-      <filename>/usr/bin/foo</filename>, will be in the
+      <filename>/usr/bin/foo</filename>, are in the
       <filename>/usr</filename> partition.
     </para>
 
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@
       <title>Creating a <filename>/home</filename> Partition</title>
 
       <para>
-        If you expect that you or other users will be storing data on
+        If you expect that you or other users will store data on
         the system, create a separate partition for the
         <filename>/home</filename> directory within an LVM volume. With
         a separate <filename>/home</filename> partition, you may upgrade
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@
 
             <para>
               If you remove an LVM physical volume from a volume group,
-              you will erase any logical volumes it contains.
+              you erase any logical volumes it contains.
             </para>
           </warning>
           <para>




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