install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
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	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 15:56:50 -0000	1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 16:00:55 -0000	1.4
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@
               <secondary><filename>/home</filename>
               </secondary>
             </indexterm>
-            <filename>/home</filename> partition, you may retain that
+            <filename>/home</filename> partition, you can retain that
             data while erasing system partitions such as
             <filename>/boot</filename>.
           </para>
@@ -711,8 +711,8 @@
           <para>
             You may not remove a physical volume from a volume group if
             doing so would leave insufficient space for that group's
-            logical volumes. For example, if a volume group is made up
-            of two 5 GB LVM physical volume partitions, then it contains
+            logical volumes.  Take for example a volume group made up
+            of two 5 GB LVM physical volume partitions, which contains
             an 8 GB logical volume. The installer would not allow you to
             remove either of the component physical volumes, since that
             would leave only 5 GB in the group for an 8 GB logical