jargon-buster/en_US jargon-buster.xml,1.2,1.3

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/jargon-buster/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv9886

Modified Files:
	jargon-buster.xml 
Log Message:
Remove debatable definition of freedom (#191352)


Index: jargon-buster.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/jargon-buster/en_US/jargon-buster.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- jargon-buster.xml	1 Apr 2006 15:32:22 -0000	1.2
+++ jargon-buster.xml	11 May 2006 21:50:21 -0000	1.3
@@ -328,16 +328,15 @@
         <glossterm>FDL</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            The GNU Free Documentation License (
+            The GNU Free Documentation License, or
             <acronym>FDL</acronym>
-            ) is a means of licensing program documentation. As is the
-            case with all freedoms, the FDL carries both rights and
-            responsibilities. You have the right to modify and
-            redistribute FDL materials, or create other works based on
-            them. You then have the responsibility of licensing any such
-            material under the FDL as well. In this fashion the FDL
-            guarantees that documentation cannot be made less free by a
-            recipient.
+            , is a means of licensing program documentation. The FDL
+            carries both rights and responsibilities. You have the right
+            to modify and redistribute FDL materials, or create other
+            works based on them. You then have the responsibility of
+            licensing any such material under the FDL as well. In this
+            fashion the FDL guarantees that documentation cannot be made
+            less free by a recipient.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>