install-guide/devel/en_US bootloader.xml, 1.4, 1.5 diskpartitioning.xml, 1.2, 1.3 entities.xml, 1.6, 1.7 firstboot.xml, 1.2, 1.3 intro.xml, 1.3, 1.4 nextsteps.xml, 1.2, 1.3 packageselection.xml, 1.3, 1.4 preparing-media.xml, 1.3, 1.4 rpm-info.xml, 1.4, 1.5

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat Oct 7 17:00:52 UTC 2006


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24759/en_US

Modified Files:
	bootloader.xml diskpartitioning.xml entities.xml firstboot.xml 
	intro.xml nextsteps.xml packageselection.xml 
	preparing-media.xml rpm-info.xml 
Log Message:
Update to 1.35, some bugfixes before FC6 release


Index: bootloader.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/bootloader.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- bootloader.xml	30 Sep 2006 03:30:05 -0000	1.4
+++ bootloader.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.5
@@ -49,10 +49,10 @@
     <title>Boot Loader Configuration Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloader.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/bootloader.eps" format="EPS"/>
       </imageobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloader.png" format="PNG"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/bootloader.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
         <phrase>Boot loader configuration screen</phrase>
@@ -149,10 +149,10 @@
       <title>Adding Operating Systems to the Boot Menu</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloaderothers.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/bootloaderothers.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloaderothers.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/bootloaderothers.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>Adding entries to the GRUB boot menu.</phrase>
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-bootloader-advanced">
-    <title>Advanced Boot loader Options</title>
+    <title>Advanced Boot Loader Options</title>
 
     <para>
       The default boot options are adequate for most situations. The
@@ -309,10 +309,10 @@
       <title>Advanced Boot Options</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootadvanced.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/bootadvanced.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootadvanced.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/bootadvanced.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>Advanced boot settings menu</phrase>


Index: diskpartitioning.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- diskpartitioning.xml	29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000	1.2
+++ diskpartitioning.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.3
@@ -59,10 +59,10 @@
       <title>Partitioning Options Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/partitionoption.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/partitionoption.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/partitionoption.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/partitionoption.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>partitioning options screen</phrase>
@@ -500,10 +500,10 @@
       <title>Disk Setup Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disksetup.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/disksetup.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disksetup.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/disksetup.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>disk setup screen</phrase>


Index: entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- entities.xml	28 Aug 2006 21:59:36 -0000	1.6
+++ entities.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.7
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCVERSION">
       <comment>Document version</comment>
-      <text>1.34</text>
+      <text>1.35</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCDATE">
       <comment>Document date</comment>
-      <text>2006-08-27</text>
+      <text>2006-10-07</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCID">
       <comment>Document ID string</comment>


Index: firstboot.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/firstboot.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- firstboot.xml	29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000	1.2
+++ firstboot.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.3
@@ -144,10 +144,11 @@
 
       <para>
         All &FED; systems automatically run the SSH remote access
-        service. The default firewall configuration allows connections
-        to this service, to ensure that administrators have immediate
-        remote access to new systems through the user and
-        <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> accounts.
+	service, and the default firewall configuration allows
+	connections to this service.  The default configuration ensures
+	that administrators have immediate remote access to new systems
+	through the user and <systemitem
+	  class="username">root</systemitem> accounts.
       </para>
     </important>
 
@@ -162,22 +163,17 @@
     <tip>
       <title>The Services List</title>
       <para>
-        The <filename>services</filename> file on every system lists the
-        port numbers and names of services that are registered with the
-        Internet Assigned Names Authority (IANA). &FED; systems hold
-        this file in the directory <filename>/etc</filename>.
+        The <filename>/etc/services</filename> file lists service port
+	numbers and names that are registered with the Internet Assigned
+	Names Authority (IANA).
       </para>
     </tip>
     <para>
       If a service uses more than one port number, enter each port. For
       example, an IMAP service enables users to access their e-mail from
-      another system with either a standard connection to TCP port 143,
-      or with an encrypted connection to TCP port 993. To permit IMAP
-      connections to your system, add <userinput>imap</userinput> or
-      port number <userinput>143</userinput>, and
-      <userinput>imaps</userinput>, or port number
-      <userinput>993</userinput>, for IMAP with SSL encryption.
-    </para>
+      another system through TCP port 143.  To permit IMAP connections
+      to your system, add <userinput>imap</userinput> or port number
+      <userinput>143</userinput>.</para>
 
     <para>
       Avoid disabling the firewall. If you believe that it is necessary
@@ -320,7 +316,7 @@
       system manually.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig-fboot-time">
-      <title>Date and Time Screen</title>
+      <title>Date and Time Screen, Local Clock</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
           <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdatetime.eps" format="EPS"/>
@@ -330,7 +326,7 @@
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
-	    Date and time screen.
+	    Date and time screen for setting local clock.
 	  </phrase>
         </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
@@ -355,7 +351,7 @@
       Time</guilabel> tab and enables the other settings on this screen.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig-fboot-time-ntp">
-      <title>Date and Time Screen</title>
+      <title>Date and Time Screen, Network Time</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
           <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdatetimentp.eps" format="EPS"/>
@@ -365,7 +361,7 @@
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
-	    Date and time screen.
+	    Date and time screen for setting network time service.
 	  </phrase>
         </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
@@ -399,79 +395,6 @@
       servers on the network.
     </para>
   </section>
-  <section id="sn-firstboot-display">
-    <title>Display</title>
-
-    <para>
-      The <application>Setup Agent</application> automatically attempts
-      to identify the graphics card and monitor for your computer. It
-      uses this information to calculate the correct
-      <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> and <guilabel>Color
-      Depth</guilabel> settings.
-    </para>
-
-<!-- This screen has been removed in FC6.
-
-    <figure id="fig-fboot-display">
-      <title>Display Screen</title>
-      <mediaobject>
-        <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplay.eps" format="EPS"/>
-        </imageobject>
-        <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplay.png" format="PNG"/>
-        </imageobject>
-        <textobject>
-          <phrase>
-	    Display screen.
-	  </phrase>
-        </textobject>
-      </mediaobject>
-    </figure>
-    <para>
-      If you need to change the monitor, select
-      <guilabel>Configure</guilabel> to display a list of manufacturers.
-      Select the manufacturer of your monitor on the list, and hit the
-      <keycap>+</keycap> key or select the triangle next to the name to
-      view supported models. Choose the correct model from the list and
-      select <guibutton>OK</guibutton>. If none of the listed models
-      match your monitor, select the closest match from either the
-      <guilabel>Generic CRT Display</guilabel> list or the
-      <guilabel>Generic LCD Display</guilabel> list.
-    </para>
-    <figure id="fig-fboot-display-monitor">
-      <title>Monitor Dialog</title>
-      <mediaobject>
-        <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplaymonitor.eps" format="EPS"/>
-        </imageobject>
-        <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplaymonitor.png" format="PNG"/>
-        </imageobject>
-        <textobject>
-          <phrase>
-	    Monitor dialog.
-	  </phrase>
-        </textobject>
-      </mediaobject>
-    </figure>
-    <para>
-      To change a display setting, select
-      <guilabel>Resolution</guilabel> or <guilabel>Color
-      Depth</guilabel>, and select a new value from the drop-down list.
-      The <application>Setup Agent</application> only shows the settings
-      that are valid for your hardware.
-    </para>
-
--->
-
-    <para>
-      To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed,
-      choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
-        <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu>
-        <guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
-    </para>
-  </section>
   <section id="sn-firstboot-systemuser">
     <title>System User</title>
 


Index: intro.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- intro.xml	29 Sep 2006 23:39:00 -0000	1.3
+++ intro.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.4
@@ -15,36 +15,47 @@
 
 <preface id="ch-intro">
   <title>Introduction</title>
-  <para>
-    &FC; is a complete desktop and server operating system created
-    entirely with open source software.
-  </para>
-  <caution>
-    <title>&FC; Lifecycle</title>
+  <section>
+    <title>About &FC;</title>
+    <para>
+      &FC; is a complete desktop and server operating system created
+      entirely with open source software.
+    </para>
+    <caution>
+      <title>&FC; Lifecycle</title>
 
+      <para>
+	&FC; is a rapidly evolving system which follows the latest
+	technical developments. &FC; may not be appropriate for use in
+	business-critical applications in your organization.
+      </para>
+    </caution>
+    <para>
+      For complete access to information about &FC;, refer to the
+      official project wiki at <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/"/>
+      and <xref linkend="ch-next-steps"/>.
+    </para>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>About this Manual</title>
+    <para>
+      This manual helps you install &FC; on desktops, laptops and
+      servers. The installation system is flexible enough to use even if
+      you have no previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If
+      you select default options, &FC; provides a complete desktop
+      operating system, including productivity applications, Internet
+      utilities, and desktop tools.
+    </para>
     <para>
-      &FC; is a rapidly evolving system which follows the latest
-      technical developments. &FC; may not be appropriate for use in
-      business-critical applications in your organization.
+      This document does not detail all of the features of the
+      installation system.
     </para>
-  </caution>
-  <para>
-    This manual helps you install &FC; on desktops, laptops and
-    servers. The installation system is flexible enough to use even if
-    you have no previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If you
-    select default options, &FC; provides a complete desktop operating
-    system, including productivity applications, Internet utilities, and
-    desktop tools.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-    This document does not detail all of the features of the
-    installation system.
-  </para>
 
-  &BUG-REPORTING;
+    &BUG-REPORTING;
 
+  </section>  
   <xi:include href="./acknowledgements.xml" xpointer="element(sn-acknowledgements)"
-  xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+    xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
 </preface>
 


Index: nextsteps.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/nextsteps.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- nextsteps.xml	25 Sep 2006 16:38:58 -0000	1.2
+++ nextsteps.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.3
@@ -26,20 +26,26 @@
       The &FP; releases updated software packages for &FC; throughout
       the support period of each version. Updated packages add new
       features, improve reliability, resolve bugs, or remove security
-      vulnerabilities. To ensure the security of your system, carry out
-      an update when the installation process completes. You should then
-      update regularly, and as soon as possible after a security
-      announcement is issued. Refer to
+      vulnerabilities. To ensure the security of your system, update
+      regularly, and as soon as possible after a security announcement
+      is issued. Refer to
       <xref linkend="sn-news-subscriptions"/> for information on the
       &FED; announcements services.
     </para>
-
     <para>
-      To update your system with the latest packages, use the
+      A new update applet, called <application>puplet</application>,
+      reminds you of updates when they are available.  The
+      <application>puplet</application> applet is installed by default
+      in &FC;.  It checks for software updates from all configured
+      repositories, and runs as a background service.  It generates a
+      notification message on the desktop if updates are found, and you
+      can click the message to update your system's software.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      To update your system with the latest packages manually, use the
       <indexterm>
         <primary>Software Updater</primary>
-      </indexterm>
-      <application>Software Updater</application>:
+      </indexterm> <application>Software Updater</application>:
     </para>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -110,15 +116,12 @@
         information and packages from a network of servers.
       </para>
     </note>
-    <tip>
-      <title>Automating Updates</title>
-      <para>
-        If your &FED; system has a permanent network connection, you may
-        choose to enable daily system updates. To enable automatic
-        updates, follow the instructions on the webpage
-        <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/yum/sn-updating-your-system.html"/>.
-      </para>
-    </tip>
+    <para>
+      If your &FED; system has a permanent network connection, you may
+      choose to enable daily system updates. To enable automatic
+      updates, follow the instructions on the webpage <ulink
+	url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/yum/sn-updating-your-system.html"/>.
+    </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-news-subscriptions">
     <title>Subscribing to &FED; Announcements and News</title>
@@ -176,7 +179,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      The Web site for the official forums is
+      The Web site for the formally endorsed forums is
       <ulink
 	url="http://forums.fedoraforum.org/"/>.
     </para>
@@ -209,7 +212,7 @@
 	    </term>
             <listitem>
               <para>
-                <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/"/>
+                <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/"/>
               </para>
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>


Index: packageselection.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- packageselection.xml	29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000	1.3
+++ packageselection.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.4
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
         <phrase>
-	    Task selection screen.
-	  </phrase>
+	  Task selection screen.
+	</phrase>
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
@@ -43,57 +43,60 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Office and Productivity</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>
-          This option provides the OpenOffice.org productivity suite,
-          the Planner project management application, graphical tools
-          such as the GIMP, and multimedia applications.
-        </para>
+	<para>
+	  This option provides the OpenOffice.org productivity suite,
+	  the Planner project management application, graphical tools
+	  such as the GIMP, and multimedia applications.
+	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Software Development</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>
-          This option provides the necessary tools to compile software
-          on your &FED; system.
-        </para>
+	<para>
+	  This option provides the necessary tools to compile software
+	  on your &FED; system.
+	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Web server</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>
-          This option provides the Apache Web server.
-        </para>
+	<para>
+	  This option provides the Apache Web server.
+	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
   </variablelist>
-  <para>
-    Select <guilabel>Customize now</guilabel> to specify the software
-    packages for your final system in more detail. This option causes
-    the installation process to display an additional customization
-    screen when you select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
-  </para>
-  <note>
-    <title>Installing Support for Additional Languages</title>
-
-    <para>
-      Select <guilabel>Customize now</guilabel> to install support for
-      additional languages. Refer to <xref linkend="sn-lang-packages"/>
-      for more information on configuring language support.
-    </para>
-  </note>
   <section id="sn-additional-repos">
     <title>Installing from Additional Repositories</title>
     <para>
+      You can define additional <firstterm>repositories</firstterm> to
+      increase the software available to your system during
+      installation. A repository is a network location that stores
+      software packages along with <firstterm>metadata</firstterm> that
+      describes them. Many of the software packages used in &FED;
+      require other software to be installed.  The installer uses the
+      metadata to ensure that these requirements are met for every piece
+      of software you select for installation.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      The &FEX; software repository contains thousands of additional
+      packages you can add at installation time if desired.  To add the
+      &FEX; software repository to the installation program, select
+      <guilabel>&FEX;</guilabel> from the repository listing.  &FEX; is
+      already defined in the installation program and requires no
+      further input.  For more information about Fedora Extras, refer to
+      the <guilabel>Release Notes</guilabel> or <ulink
+	url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Extras"/>.
+    </para>
+    <para>
       To include software from <firstterm>repositories</firstterm> other
-      than Fedora Core, select <guilabel>Add additional software
-	repositories</guilabel>.  A repository is a network location
-      that stores software packages along with
-      <firstterm>metadata</firstterm> that describes them.  The
-      following list includes examples of ways you can use this option.
+      than &FC; and &FEX;, select <guilabel>Add additional software
+	repositories</guilabel>.  The following list includes examples
+      of ways you can use this option.
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -108,16 +111,14 @@
 	    or any network where bandwidth is a concern.
 	  </para>
 	</formalpara>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-	<formalpara>
-	  <title>Install Fedora Extras Software</title>
-	  <para>If you provide the location of a repository of Fedora
-	    Extras software, you can include many additional packages on
-	    your system during installation.  For more information about
-	    Fedora Extras, refer to the Release Notes or <ulink
-	      url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Extras"/>.</para>
-	</formalpara>
+	<caution>
+	  <title>Upgrading and Updates</title> <para>Package updates
+	    during the release cycle of a single verison of &FC; are
+	    intended to upgrade only that version.  If you are upgrading
+	    a previous version of &FC;, you may encounter problems if
+	    you include an update repository during this step.  Problems
+	    are less likely when performing a fresh installation.</para>
+	</caution>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<formalpara>
@@ -160,21 +161,19 @@
 	  http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/updates-released-fc&FCLOCALVER;</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>Fedora Extras - http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/fedora-extras-&FCLOCALVER;</para>
+	<para>Fedora Extras -
+	  http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/fedora-extras-&FCLOCALVER;</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-    <important>
-      <title>These URLs are Mirror Lists</title>
-      <para>
+    <para>
 	The URLs above provide a list of actual mirrors.  You cannot use
-	them verbatim in the <guilabel>Add repository</guilabel>
-	dialog.  Visit the URL for a list of actual repository
-	locations.  If you see the text <literal>$ARCH</literal> in the
-	URL, substitute your system's architecture.  See <xref
+      them verbatim in the <guilabel>Add repository</guilabel> dialog.
+      Visit the URL for a list of actual repository locations.  If you
+      see the text <literal>$ARCH</literal> in the URL, substitute your
+      system's architecture.  See <xref
 	  linkend="ch-hwarchitecture"/> for more information on
-	architectures.
-      </para>
-    </important>
+      architectures.
+    </para>
     <para>
       Once you provide information for an additional repository, the
       installer reads the package metadata over the network.  Software
@@ -193,91 +192,32 @@
       </para>
     </note>
   </section>  
-  <section id="sn-mandatory-services">
-    <title>Core Network Services</title>
-
-    <para>
-      All Fedora Core installations include the following network
-      services:
-    </para>
-
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          centralized logging through syslog
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          email through SMTP (Simple Mail Transfer Protocol)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          network file sharing through NFS (Network File System)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          remote access through SSH (Secure SHell)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          resource advertising through mDNS (multicast DNS)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-
-    <para>
-      The default installation also provides:
-    </para>
-
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          network file transfer through HTTP (HyperText Transfer
-          Protocol)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          printing through CUPS (Common UNIX Printing System)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          remote desktop access through VNC (Virtual Network Computing)
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-
+  <section id="sn-package-selection">
+    <title>Customizing the Software Selection</title>
     <para>
-      Some automated processes on your Fedora system use the email
-      service to send reports and messages to the system administrator.
-      By default, the email, logging, and printing services do not
-      accept connections from other systems. &FED; installs the NFS
-      sharing, HTTP, and VNC components without enabling those services.
+      Select <guilabel>Customize now</guilabel> to specify the software
+      packages for your final system in more detail. This option causes
+      the installation process to display an additional customization
+      screen when you select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
     </para>
+    <note>
+      <title>Installing Support for Additional Languages</title>
 
-    <para>
-      You may configure your Fedora system after installation to offer
-      email, file sharing, logging, printing and remote desktop access
-      services. The SSH service is enabled by default. You may use NFS
-      to access files on other systems without enabling the NFS sharing
-      service.
-    </para>
-  </section>
-  <section id="sn-package-selection">
-    <title>Customizing the Software Selection</title>
+      <para>
+      Select <guilabel>Customize now</guilabel> to install support for
+	additional languages. Refer to <xref
+	  linkend="sn-lang-packages"/> for more information on
+	configuring language support.
+      </para>
+    </note>
 
     <para>
       &FED; divides the included software into
       <indexterm>
         <primary>package groups</primary>
-      </indexterm>
-      <firstterm>package groups</firstterm>. For ease of use, the
-      package selection screen displays these groups as six categories:
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>package groups</firstterm>. For ease of
+      use, the package selection screen displays these groups as six
+      categories:
     </para>
     <figure id="fig-package-selection">
       <title>Package Group Selection Screen</title>
@@ -333,36 +273,115 @@
         </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
-    <tip>
-      <title>Changing Your Mind</title>
-      <para>
-        The packages that you select are not permanent. After you boot
-        your system, use the <application>pirut</application> tool to
-        either install new software, or remove installed packages. To
-        run this tool, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
-        <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Add/Remove
-        Software</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. The &FED; software
-        management system downloads the latest packages from network
-        servers, rather than using those on the installation discs.
-      </para>
-    </tip>
-  </section>
-  <section id="sn-lang-packages">
-    <title>Additional Language Support</title>
-
-    <para>
-      Your &FC; system automatically supports the language that you
-      selected at the start of the installation process. To include
-      support for additional languages, select the package group for
-      those languages from the <guilabel>Languages</guilabel> category.
-    </para>
-
     <para>
       After you choose the desired packages, select
       <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed. &FC; checks your selection,
       and automatically adds any extra packages required to use the
       software you select.
     </para>
+    <section id="sn-changing-selection">
+      <title>Changing Your Mind</title>
+      <para>
+        The packages that you select are not permanent. After you boot
+	your system, use the <application>pirut</application> tool to
+	either install new software or remove installed packages. To run
+	this tool, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Add/Remove Software</guimenuitem>
+	</menuchoice>. The &FED; software management system downloads
+	the latest packages from network servers, rather than using
+	those on the installation discs.
+      </para>
+    </section>
+    <section id="sn-lang-packages">
+      <title>Additional Language Support</title>
+
+      <para>
+	Your &FC; system automatically supports the language that you
+	selected at the start of the installation process. To include
+	support for additional languages, select the package group for
+	those languages from the <guilabel>Languages</guilabel>
+	category.
+      </para>
+
+    </section>
+    <section id="sn-mandatory-services">
+      <title>Core Network Services</title>
+
+      <para>
+	All Fedora Core installations include the following network
+	services:
+      </para>
+
+      <itemizedlist>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    centralized logging through syslog
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    email through SMTP (Simple Mail Transfer Protocol)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    network file sharing through NFS (Network File System)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    remote access through SSH (Secure SHell)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    resource advertising through mDNS (multicast DNS)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+
+      <para>
+	The default installation also provides:
+      </para>
+
+      <itemizedlist>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    network file transfer through HTTP (HyperText Transfer
+	    Protocol)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    printing through CUPS (Common UNIX Printing System)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    remote desktop access through VNC (Virtual Network
+	    Computing)
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+
+      <para>
+	Some automated processes on your Fedora system use the email
+	service to send reports and messages to the system
+	administrator. By default, the email, logging, and printing
+	services do not accept connections from other systems. &FED;
+	installs the NFS sharing, HTTP, and VNC components without
+	enabling those services.
+      </para>
+
+      <para>
+	You may configure your Fedora system after installation to offer
+	email, file sharing, logging, printing and remote desktop access
+	services. The SSH service is enabled by default. You may use NFS
+	to access files on other systems without enabling the NFS
+	sharing service.
+      </para>
+    </section>
   </section>
 </chapter>
 


Index: preparing-media.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/preparing-media.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- preparing-media.xml	29 Sep 2006 23:35:37 -0000	1.3
+++ preparing-media.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.4
@@ -172,11 +172,12 @@
 		Image</guimenuitem> </menuchoice> if appropriate. The following
 	    command line works for many other environments:
 	  </para>
-	  <screen>
-	    <userinput>cdrecord
-	      --device=<replaceable>cdwriter-device</replaceable> -tao -eject
-	      <replaceable>image-file.iso</replaceable></userinput>
-	  </screen>
+
+<screen>
+<userinput>cdrecord --device=<replaceable>cdwriter-device</replaceable> -tao -eject <replaceable>image-file.iso</replaceable></userinput>
+</screen>
+
+
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
@@ -229,7 +230,7 @@
       the device file matches the name assigned to the device by your
       system. All device files appear in the directory
       <filename>/dev/</filename>. For example,
-      <filename>/dev/sda</filename> denotes the first USB, SATA or SCSI
+      <filename>/dev/sda</filename> denotes the first USB, SATA, or SCSI
       device that is attached to the system.
     </para>
 
@@ -255,9 +256,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  In the terminal window, type the following command:
 	</para>
-	<screen>
-	  <userinput>dmesg</userinput>
-	</screen>
+	<screen><userinput>dmesg</userinput></screen>
 	<para>
 	  Look for the items in the <command>dmesg</command> output that relate
 	  to the detection of a new SCSI device. Linux systems treat USB media


Index: rpm-info.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- rpm-info.xml	27 Aug 2006 18:36:39 -0000	1.4
+++ rpm-info.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000	1.5
@@ -22,6 +22,10 @@
   <title>Fedora Core 6 Installation Guide</title>
   <desc>Provides documentation for the installation process.</desc>
   <changelog order="newest-first">
+    <revision date="2006-10-07" number="1.35">
+      <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
+      <details>Bugfixes, most minor</details>
+    </revision>
     <revision date="2006-08-27" number="1.34" role="doc">
       <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
       <details>Major reorganization for better workflow</details>




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