install-guide/devel/en_US new-users.xml,1.2,1.3
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Apr 29 18:50:13 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17793
Modified Files:
new-users.xml
Log Message:
Make this admonition clearer.
Index: new-users.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- new-users.xml 29 Apr 2007 18:37:27 -0000 1.2
+++ new-users.xml 29 Apr 2007 18:50:11 -0000 1.3
@@ -200,11 +200,11 @@
system as desired.</para>
<tip>
<title>Download Size</title>
- <para>A default installation of &DISTRO; requires more time to
- download than the Live CD, but includes more software. It
- generally requires less time to download than the entire DVD
- distribution. Actual results depend on the mirror you select
- and general network traffic conditions.</para>
+ <para>Installing the default software for &DISTRO; over the
+ Internet requires more time than the Live CD, but less time
+ than the entire DVD distribution. Actual results depend on
+ the actual software you select and network traffic
+ conditions.</para>
</tip>
<para>The following table explains where to find the desired files
on a mirror site.</para>
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