readme-burning-isos/F-7/en_US README-BURNING-ISOS.xml, 1.1, 1.2 doc-entities.xml, 1.1, 1.2 rpm-info.xml, 1.1, 1.2

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Jun 15 22:49:12 UTC 2007 

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/readme-burning-isos/F-7/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv15018/F-7/en_US

Modified Files:
	README-BURNING-ISOS.xml doc-entities.xml rpm-info.xml 
Log Message:
Backport changes from devel to F-7


Index: README-BURNING-ISOS.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/readme-burning-isos/F-7/en_US/README-BURNING-ISOS.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- README-BURNING-ISOS.xml	15 Jun 2007 21:59:13 -0000	1.1
+++ README-BURNING-ISOS.xml	15 Jun 2007 22:49:09 -0000	1.2
@@ -91,15 +91,17 @@
       <title>Choosing the ISO Files</title>
       <para>
         The exact files you need from the download server depend upon
-	your system and the version of &DISTRO; you are downloading.
-	The files you need are named in the form of
-	<filename>FC-<replaceable><version></replaceable>-<replaceable><arch></replaceable>-disc<replaceable><count></replaceable>.iso</filename>, 
+	your system and the version of &DISTRO; you are downloading. The
+	files you need are named in the form of
+	<filename>F-<replaceable><version></replaceable>-<replaceable><arch></replaceable>-disc<replaceable><count></replaceable>.iso</filename>, 
 	where "<replaceable><version></replaceable>" is the
 	version of &DISTRO; you wish to download,
 	"<replaceable><arch></replaceable>" is your computer's
 	processor architecture, and
 	"<replaceable><count></replaceable>" is the disc number
-	for each of the installation CDs.
+	for each of the installation CDs.  In the case of an
+	installation DVD, <filename>DVD</filename> is used in the
+	filename.
       </para>
       <para>
         The computer processor architecture is usually
@@ -114,49 +116,10 @@
       </para>
       <para>
         If you are downloading &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; for a Pentium 4
-	computer, for example, you need these files:
-      </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc1.iso</filename>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc2.iso</filename>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc3.iso</filename>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc4.iso</filename>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc5.iso</filename>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-      <para>
-        Or, if you prefer to install from a single DVD, you only need
-	this file:
-      </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-DVD.iso</filename>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-      <para>
-        You may also need the <code>SHA1SUM</code> file to verify that
-	the files you have downloaded are complete and correct.
+	computer, for example, you need the file
+	<filename>&FCXVERSPIN;-i386-DVD.iso</filename>. You may also
+	need the <filename>SHA1SUM</filename> file to verify that the
+	files you have downloaded are complete and correct.
       </para>
     </section>
   </section>
@@ -255,7 +218,7 @@
 	<command>sha1sum</command> with each ISO file like this:
       </para>
       <screen>cd "C:\Documents and Settings\Owner\My Documents\My Downloads\&DISTRO;"
-sha1sum.exe &FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc1.iso</screen>
+sha1sum.exe &FCXVERSPIN;-i386-DVD.iso</screen>
       <para>
         The program takes some time to complete, since it must read the
 	entire ISO file.
@@ -294,11 +257,19 @@
       the resulting CD is not usable for installation purposes.
     </para>
     <para>
-      To create the &DISTRO; installation CDs, <emphasis role='strong'>it
-	is vital that you only perform the second step</emphasis> with
-      the &DISTRO; ISO files. The steps required to do this using
-      several popular CD burning applications are listed below.
+      To create the &DISTRO; installation discs, <emphasis
+	role='strong'>it is vital that you only perform the second
+	step</emphasis> with the &DISTRO; ISO files. The steps required
+      to do this using several popular CD burning applications are
+      listed below.
     </para>
+    <note>
+      <title>Disc Burning on Fedora</title>
+      <para>Information on how-to burn media using Fedora is covered in
+	the <ulink
+	  url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/user-guide/"><citetitle>Fedora 
+	    User Guide</citetitle></ulink></para>
+    </note>
     <section id="sn-iso-recorder-v2">
       <title>Using The ISO Recorder V2 Power Toy</title>
       <para>
@@ -310,24 +281,24 @@
         <step>
           <para>
             In <application>Explorer</application>, right click on the
-	    first &DISTRO; ISO file
+	    first &DISTRO; ISO file.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
             In the context menu, select <guilabel>Copy image to
-	      CD</guilabel>
+	      CD</guilabel>.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
             Follow the steps given by the <guilabel>CD Recording
-	      Wizard</guilabel> pop-up
+	      Wizard</guilabel> pop-up.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Repeat for the remaining ISO files
+            Repeat for the remaining ISO files.
           </para>
         </step>
       </procedure>
@@ -337,27 +308,22 @@
       <procedure>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Start <guilabel>Creator Classic</guilabel>
+            Start <guilabel>Creator Classic</guilabel>.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Select <guilabel>Other Tasks</guilabel>
+            Select <guilabel>Other Tasks</guilabel>.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Select <guilabel>Burn from Disc Image File</guilabel>
+            Select <guilabel>Burn from Disc Image File</guilabel>.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Choose the first &DISTRO; ISO file and burn it
-          </para>
-        </step>
-        <step>
-          <para>
-            Repeat the above steps for each of the other ISO files
+            Choose the &DISTRO; ISO file and burn it.
           </para>
         </step>
       </procedure>
@@ -367,27 +333,27 @@
       <procedure>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Start the program
+            Start the program.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Open the <guimenu>File</guimenu> menu
+            Open the <guimenu>File</guimenu> menu.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Select <guimenuitem>Burn Image</guimenuitem>
+            Select <guimenuitem>Burn Image</guimenuitem>.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Choose the first &DISTRO; ISO file and burn it
+            Choose the &DISTRO; ISO file and burn it.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Repeat the above steps for each of the other ISO files
+            Repeat the above steps for each of the other ISO files.
           </para>
         </step>
       </procedure>
@@ -397,12 +363,12 @@
       <procedure>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Start the program
+            Start the program.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Select <guilabel>Disc Image or Saved Project</guilabel>
+            Select <guilabel>Disc Image or Saved Project</guilabel>.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
@@ -413,19 +379,18 @@
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            The next screen allows you to select <guilabel>Writing
-	      Speed</guilabel>. You should set this to 4x for DVD, or
-	    16x for CD, for best performance.
+	    Set the writing speed for your disc recorder.  The optimal
+	    setting depends on your specific hardware.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Click Next to Burn
+            Click Next to burn.
           </para>
         </step>
         <step>
           <para>
-            Repeat the steps above for the other ISO files
+            Repeat the steps above for the other ISO files.
           </para>
         </step>
       </procedure>
@@ -449,8 +414,8 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          Reboot the computer with disc 1 in the CD drive.  The boot
-	  menu for the &DISTRO; installer appears.
+          Reboot the computer with the &DISTRO; disc in the CD drive.
+	  The boot menu for the &DISTRO; installer appears.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
@@ -466,17 +431,10 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          Conduct the check against the first disc. If the check
-	  succeeds, your disc is correct.  At this point the installer
-	  has changed nothing on your computer. Remove the &DISTRO;
-	  installation disc and restart the system so that the computer
-	  boots into Windows.
-	</para>
-      </step>
-      <step>
-	<para>
-	  Burn the other three ISO images. After burning the other
-	  discs, you can repeat the media check to test them all.
+          Conduct the check against the disc. If the check succeeds,
+	  your disc is correct.  At this point the installer has changed
+	  nothing on your computer. Remove the &DISTRO; installation
+	  disc and restart the system.
 	</para>
       </step>
     </procedure>


Index: doc-entities.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/readme-burning-isos/F-7/en_US/doc-entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- doc-entities.xml	15 Jun 2007 21:59:13 -0000	1.1
+++ doc-entities.xml	15 Jun 2007 22:49:09 -0000	1.2
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <group name="General">
     <entity name="FCXHYP">
       <comment>Short version of distro and optional hyphen</comment>
-      <text><use entity="FCX"/></text>
+      <text><use entity="FCX"/>-</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="FCXVER">
       <comment>Short version of distro name and version</comment>
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
     </entity>
     <entity name="FCSPIN">
       <comment>Name of primary ISO spin</comment>
-      <text>Prime</text>
+      <text></text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="FCXVERSPIN">
       <comment>Prefix for ISO file names</comment>
-      <text><use entity="FCXVER"/>-<use entity="FCSPIN"/></text>
+      <text><use entity="FCXVER"/><use entity="FCSPIN"/></text>
     </entity>
   </group>
 </entities>


Index: rpm-info.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/readme-burning-isos/F-7/en_US/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- rpm-info.xml	15 Jun 2007 21:59:13 -0000	1.1
+++ rpm-info.xml	15 Jun 2007 22:49:09 -0000	1.2
@@ -24,6 +24,10 @@
   <title>Burning ISO Images to Disc</title>
   <desc>How to download ISO images and create CD and DVD media</desc>
   <changelog order="newest-first">
+    <revision date="2007-06-03" number="7.0.1">
+      <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
+      <details>Fix file names, revise entities, and clean up details</details>
+    </revision>
     <revision date="2007-05-21" number="7.0.0">
       <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
       <details>F7 final release</details>

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