install-guide/devel/en_US packageselection.xml,1.7,1.8

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed May 23 01:22:34 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12491

Modified Files:
	packageselection.xml 
Log Message:
Combine one-sentence paragraphs



Index: packageselection.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- packageselection.xml	23 May 2007 01:22:11 -0000	1.7
+++ packageselection.xml	23 May 2007 01:22:31 -0000	1.8
@@ -17,11 +17,8 @@
   <title>Software Selection</title>
   <para>
     By default, the &FED; installation process loads a selection of
-    software that is suitable for a desktop system.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-    To include or remove software for common tasks, select the relevant
-    items from the list:
+    software that is suitable for a desktop system. To include or remove
+    software for common tasks, select the relevant items from the list:
   </para>
   <variablelist>
     <varlistentry>




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