install-guide/devel/en_US packageselection.xml,1.7,1.8
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed May 23 01:22:34 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12491
Modified Files:
packageselection.xml
Log Message:
Combine one-sentence paragraphs
Index: packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 01:22:11 -0000 1.7
+++ packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 01:22:31 -0000 1.8
@@ -17,11 +17,8 @@
<title>Software Selection</title>
<para>
By default, the &FED; installation process loads a selection of
- software that is suitable for a desktop system.
- </para>
- <para>
- To include or remove software for common tasks, select the relevant
- items from the list:
+ software that is suitable for a desktop system. To include or remove
+ software for common tasks, select the relevant items from the list:
</para>
<variablelist>
<varlistentry>
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