install-guide/devel/en_US packageselection.xml,1.8,1.9

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed May 23 02:10:40 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv23013

Modified Files:
	packageselection.xml 
Log Message:
- Remove old Extras information.
- Keeping screenshots for this slightly confusing interface, for now.



Index: packageselection.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- packageselection.xml	23 May 2007 01:22:31 -0000	1.8
+++ packageselection.xml	23 May 2007 02:10:37 -0000	1.9
@@ -64,25 +64,10 @@
       of software you select for installation.
     </para>
     <para>
-      The &FEX; software repository contains thousands of additional
-      packages you can add at installation time if desired.  To add the
-      &FEX; software repository to the installation program, select
-      <guilabel>&FEX;</guilabel> from the repository listing.  &FEX; is
-      already defined in the installation program and requires no
-      further input.  For more information about Fedora Extras, refer to
-      the <guilabel>Release Notes</guilabel> or <ulink
-	url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Extras"/>.
-    </para>
-    <note>
-      <title>&FEX; and Network Connectivity</title>
-      <para>The &FEX; repository selection is available if your computer
-	has a connection to the internet.</para>
-    </note>
-    <para>
       To include software from <firstterm>repositories</firstterm> other
-      than &FC; and &FEX;, select <guilabel>Add additional software
-	repositories</guilabel>.  The following list includes examples
-      of ways you can use this option.
+      than the &FED; package collection, select <guilabel>Add additional
+	software repositories</guilabel>.  The following list includes
+      examples of ways you can use this option.
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -90,20 +75,21 @@
 	  <title>Get the Latest Fedora Software</title>
 	  <para>
 	    If you provide the location of a repository of updates for
-	    Fedora Core, your system will have the most recent versions
-	    of Core software.  You will not need to peform a system
+	    &DISTRO;, your system will have the most recent versions of
+	    &DISTRO; software.  You will not need to peform a system
 	    update immediately after installation to get these updates.
 	    This usage is ideal if you are installing over the Internet
 	    or any network where bandwidth is a concern.
 	  </para>
 	</formalpara>
 	<caution>
-	  <title>Upgrading and Updates</title> <para>Package updates
-	    during the release cycle of a single verison of &FC; are
-	    intended to upgrade only that version.  If you are upgrading
-	    a previous version of &FC;, you may encounter problems if
-	    you include an update repository during this step.  Problems
-	    are less likely when performing a fresh installation.</para>
+	  <title>Upgrading and Updates</title>
+	  <para>Package updates during the release cycle of a single
+	    verison of &FC; are intended to upgrade only that version.
+	    If you are upgrading a previous version of &FC;, you may
+	    encounter problems if you include an update repository
+	    during this step.  Problems are less likely when performing
+	    a fresh installation.</para>
 	</caution>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -118,48 +104,15 @@
     </itemizedlist>
     <para>
       If you select <guilabel>Add additional software
-	repositories</guilabel>, the following dialog appears:
-    </para>
-    <figure id="fig-additional-repos">
-      <title>Add Repository Screen</title>
-      <mediaobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/additionalrepo.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/additionalrepo.png" format="PNG"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<textobject>
-	  <phrase>
-	    Add repository screen.
-	  </phrase>
-	</textobject>
-      </mediaobject>
-    </figure>
-    <para>
-      Provide a name for the repository and the URL for its location.
-      Here are some URLs for listings of specific Fedora software
-      repository mirrors.
-    </para>
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Fedora Core Updates -
-	  http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/updates-released-fc&FCLOCALVER;</para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-	<para>Fedora Extras -
-	  http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/fedora-extras-&FCLOCALVER;</para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-    <para>
-	The URLs above provide a list of actual mirrors.  You cannot use
-      them verbatim in the <guilabel>Add repository</guilabel> dialog.
-      Visit the URL for a list of actual repository locations.  If you
-      see the text <literal>$ARCH</literal> in the URL, substitute your
-      system's architecture.  See <xref
-	  linkend="sn-which-arch"/> for more information on
-      architectures.
-    </para>
+	repositories</guilabel>, the <guilabel>Add repository</guilabel>
+      dialog appears. Provide a <guilabel>Repository name</guilabel> and
+      the <guilabel>Repository URL</guilabel> for its location.
+    </para>
+    <tip>
+      <title>&DISTRO; Software Mirrors</title>
+      <para>To find a &DISTRO; software mirror near you, refer to <ulink
+	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mirrors"/>.</para>
+    </tip>
     <para>
       Once you provide information for an additional repository, the
       installer reads the package metadata over the network.  Software
@@ -168,7 +121,7 @@
       more information on selecting packages.
     </para>
     <note>
-      <title>Backtracking Erases Added Repository Data</title>
+      <title>Backtracking Removes Repository Metadata</title>
       <para>
 	If you choose <guilabel>Back</guilabel> from the package
 	selection screen, any extra repository data you may have entered
@@ -177,7 +130,7 @@
 	repository once entered.
       </para>
     </note>
-  </section>  
+  </section>
   <section id="sn-package-selection">
     <title>Customizing the Software Selection</title>
     <para>




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