translation-quick-start-guide/en_US Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml, 1.9, 1.10

[Noriko Mizumoto (noriko)]

Author: noriko

Update of /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12419

Modified Files:
	Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml 
Log Message:
sec2.5 for signing the CLA. this section has entirely rewritten to replace the procedure to one-click approval.


Index: Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	15 Apr 2008 05:15:22 -0000	1.9
+++ Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	16 Apr 2008 05:14:25 -0000	1.10
@@ -168,12 +168,12 @@
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  Go back to <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/"/> and log in with your password.
+		Go back to <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/"/> and log in with your password. The welcome page will be displayed, and it reminds you that CLA is not completed and that an SSH key is not submitted.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-		To submitt public SSH key and GPG key ID, click <guilabel>My Account</guilabel> or go to <ulink url=" https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit"/>.
+		To submitt public SSH key and GPG key ID, click <guilabel>My Account</guilabel> or go to <ulink url=" https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit"/>. 
         </para>
       </step>
       <step>
@@ -183,11 +183,16 @@
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  For other fields, please fill only when you feel comfortable to open those infomration. Otherwise you can leave them empty.
+	  <guilabel>Telephone Number</guilabel> and <guilabel>Postal Address</guilabel> fields, they are required to fill in when signing the CLA. These information is not accessible to others except admin groups. Please refer to Fedora Privacy Policy at  <ulink url=" http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Legal/PrivacyPolicy"/>.
   	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
+	  Other fields will be displayed by any other member by visitng the user's view page.
+	</para>
+      </step>
+      <step>
+	<para>
 	  Now click <guilabel>Save!</guilabel> located at the bottom of this page to save your information.
 	</para>
       </step>
@@ -202,39 +207,22 @@
     </para>
     <procedure>			    
       <step>
-	<para>Visit <ulink
-	    url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/send-cla.cgi"/>. 
-	  Authenticate using your username and password from the previous
-	  process.
+	<para>Visit <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/"/> and login your account using your username and password obtained from the previous process.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
-	<para>Wait for receipt of an email with an attachment. The
-	  attachment is an agreement you can sign and return. Save the
-	  attachment to your Desktop.
-	</para>
-      </step>
-      <step>
-	<para>Double-click the file on your Desktop to open it with an
-	  editor. Add the phrase "I agree" and your full name.
+	<para>
+	  In the Welcome page, click <guilabel>complete the CLA</guilabel> or go to <ulink url=" https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit"/>.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  Digitally sign the text file using your GPG key with the
-	  following command, providing your password when prompted:
-	</para>
-	<screen><command> gpg -a --sign fedora-icla-{username}.txt </command></screen>
-	<para>There is now a new file on your Desktop that ends with
-	  <filename class="extension">.asc</filename>.  This file is the
-	  signed version of the CLA.
+	  If the information of telephone number and postal address have not been provided yet, the Edit Account (user_name) page will be appeared. Otherwise &FED; Contributor License Agreement page will be displayed. Read through the agreement carefully and click <guibutton>I agree</buibutton> if you are happy to do so. If not, click <guibutton>I do not agree</guibutton>.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  Open your email client again and reply to the CLA email.
-	  Attach the signed file which ends with <filename
-	    class="extension">.asc</filename>, and send the email.
+	  The user-veiw page is appeared and shows the <guilabel>CLA:</guilabel> field as <guilabel>CLA Done</guilabel>.
 	</para>
       </step>
     </procedure>