release-notes/devel/en_US Colophon.xml, 1.41, 1.42 Desktop.xml, 1.47, 1.48 Devel.xml, 1.23, 1.24 I18n.xml, 1.36, 1.37 Live.xml, 1.17, 1.18

Piotr DrÄg (raven) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Aug 8 01:13:33 UTC 2008


Author: raven

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8347/release-notes/devel/en_US

Modified Files:
	Colophon.xml Desktop.xml Devel.xml I18n.xml Live.xml 
Log Message:
Some cosmetic fixes


Index: Colophon.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Colophon.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.41
retrieving revision 1.42
diff -u -r1.41 -r1.42
--- Colophon.xml	8 Apr 2008 23:28:00 -0000	1.41
+++ Colophon.xml	8 Aug 2008 01:13:30 -0000	1.42
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/AlainPortal">Alain
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/AlainPortal'>Alain
           Portal (translator - French)</ulink>
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -77,9 +77,10 @@
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><ulink
-	url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ClintSavage">Clint
-	Savage</ulink> (editor)</para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ClintSavage'>Clint
+          Savage</ulink> (editor)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
@@ -125,8 +126,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  <ulink
-	    url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FabianAffolter'>Fabian
+	  <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FabianAffolter'>Fabian
 	    Affolter</ulink> (translator - German)
 	</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -143,14 +143,16 @@
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GeertWarrink">Geert Warrink</ulink> (translator - Dutch)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GeertWarrink'>Geert
+          Warrink</ulink> (translator - Dutch)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GuidoGrazioli">Guido Grazioli</ulink> (translator - Italian)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GuidoGrazioli'>Guido
+          Grazioli</ulink> (translator - Italian)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
@@ -160,7 +162,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/IgorMiletic">Igor
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/IgorMiletic'>Igor
           Miletic</ulink> (translator - Serbian)
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -178,7 +180,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JesseKeating">Jesse
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JesseKeating'>Jesse
           Keating</ulink> (beat contributor)
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -207,9 +209,10 @@
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/KevinKofler">Kevin Kofler</ulink> (beat writer)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/KevinKofler'>Kevin
+          Kofler</ulink> (beat writer)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
@@ -219,19 +222,21 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-		<ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Lenka%C4%8Celkov%C3%A1">Lenka Celkova</ulink> (translator - Slovak)
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Lenka%C4%8Celkov%C3%A1'>Lenka
+          Celkova</ulink> (translator - Slovak)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/LicioFonseca">Licio
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/LicioFonseca'>Licio
           Fonseca</ulink> (translator - Brazilian Portuguese)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/LubomirKundrak">Lubomir Kundrak</ulink> (beat contributor, translator - Slovak)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/LubomirKundrak'>Lubomir
+          Rintel</ulink> (beat contributor, translator - Slovak)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
@@ -247,27 +252,27 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink
-	    url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MarcWiriadisastra'>Marc
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MarcWiriadisastra'>Marc
           Wiriadisastra</ulink> (writer, editor)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink
-	    url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MarekMahut'>Marek
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MarekMahut'>Marek
           Mahut</ulink> (translator - Slovak)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MathieuSchopfer">Mathieu Schopfer</ulink> (translator - French)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MathieuSchopfer'>Mathieu
+          Schopfer</ulink> (translator - French)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MatthieuRondeau">Matthieu Rondeau</ulink> (translator - French)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MatthieuRondeau'>Matthieu
+          Rondeau</ulink> (translator - French)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
@@ -278,14 +283,14 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
           <ulink
-	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MaximDziumanenko">Maxim
+	  url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MaximDziumanenko'>Maxim
           Dziumanenko</ulink> (translator - Ukrainian)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           <ulink
-	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MurrayMcAllister">Murray
+	  url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MurrayMcAllister'>Murray
           McAllister</ulink> (editor)
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -314,9 +319,10 @@
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Pavol%C5%A0imo">Pavol Simo</ulink> (translator - Slovak)
-	      </para>
+        <para>
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Pavol%C5%A0imo'>Pavol
+          Simo</ulink> (translator - Slovak)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
@@ -332,7 +338,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/PiotrDrag'>Piotr
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Raven'>Piotr
           Drag</ulink> (translator - Polish)
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -368,15 +374,14 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/TetaBilianou">Teta
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/TetaBilianou'>Teta
           Bilianou</ulink> (translator - Greek)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink
-	    url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ThomasCanniot'>ThomasCanniot</ulink> 
-	  (translator - French)
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ThomasCanniot'>Thomas
+          Canniot</ulink> (translator - French)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -405,8 +410,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <ulink
-	    url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/VillePekkaVainio'>Ville-Pekka
+          <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/VillePekkaVainio'>Ville-Pekka
           Vainio</ulink> (translator - Finnish)
         </para>
       </listitem>


Index: Desktop.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Desktop.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -r1.47 -r1.48
--- Desktop.xml	18 May 2008 22:14:02 -0000	1.47
+++ Desktop.xml	8 Aug 2008 01:13:30 -0000	1.48
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
       <para>
         GNOME 2.22 features the new Gvfs, a userspace virtual
-        file-system with back-ends for sftp, ftp, dav, smb, obexftp, and
+        file system with back-ends for sftp, ftp, dav, smb, obexftp, and
         others. The Gvfs system is the replacement/successor of
         <systemitem class="service">gnome-vfs</systemitem>.
       </para>
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@
         track of the current
         <systemitem class="service">gvfs</systemitem> mounts. Most
         mounts are run in a separate daemon process. Clients talk to the
-        mounts with a combination of DBus calls (on the session bus and
-        using peer-to-peer DBus) and a custom protocol for file
+        mounts with a combination of D-Bus calls (on the session bus and
+        using peer-to-peer D-Bus) and a custom protocol for file
         contents.
       </para>
 


Index: Devel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Devel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- Devel.xml	6 May 2008 23:22:16 -0000	1.23
+++ Devel.xml	8 Aug 2008 01:13:30 -0000	1.24
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
         </listitem>
 	<listitem>
 		<para>
-			E.P.I.C, for developing perl:
+			E.P.I.C, for developing Perl:
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			<ulink url="http://e-p-i-c.sourceforge.net/" />


Index: I18n.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/I18n.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.36
retrieving revision 1.37
diff -u -r1.36 -r1.37
--- I18n.xml	7 May 2008 00:04:02 -0000	1.36
+++ I18n.xml	8 Aug 2008 01:13:30 -0000	1.37
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
 
       <para>
         This release adds the <package>scim-python</package> package,
-        which allows writing Input Method Engines for SCIM in python.
+        which allows writing Input Method Engines for SCIM in Python.
       </para>
     </section>
 


Index: Live.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- Live.xml	8 Apr 2008 17:28:39 -0000	1.17
+++ Live.xml	8 Aug 2008 01:13:30 -0000	1.18
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     </para>
   </tip>
   <para>
-    The Fedora release includes several live ISO images in addition to
+    The Fedora release includes several Live ISO images in addition to
     the traditional installation images. These ISO images are bootable,
     and you can burn them to media and use them to try out Fedora. They
     also include a feature that allows you to install the Live image




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