release-notes/devel/en_US Installer.xml,1.31,1.32

Murray McAllister (mdious) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon Mar 17 23:04:28 UTC 2008


Author: mdious

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv14127/en_US

Modified Files:
	Installer.xml 
Log Message:
periods at the end of capitalized lists



Index: Installer.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Installer.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.31
retrieving revision 1.32
diff -u -r1.31 -r1.32
--- Installer.xml	17 Mar 2008 22:37:00 -0000	1.31
+++ Installer.xml	17 Mar 2008 23:04:25 -0000	1.32
@@ -137,12 +137,12 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Built-in features for resizing ext2/3, vfat, and ntfs
-          partitions
+          partitions.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Encrypted partition support
+          Encrypted partition support.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -150,13 +150,13 @@
           Consolidated network booting ISO image, replacing old
           <filename>boot.iso</filename>,
           <filename>diskboot.img</filename>, and
-          <filename>rescuecd.iso</filename>
+          <filename>rescuecd.iso</filename>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Second stage installer location now independent of software
-          package location
+          package location.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -165,25 +165,25 @@
           <systemitem
 	    class="filesystem">ext4</systemitem>
           partitions, with the <option>iamanext4developer</option> boot
-          option
+          option.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Native installation to <systemitem>x86_64</systemitem>
           machines using EFI and booting via
-          <systemitem>grub</systemitem>
+          <systemitem>grub</systemitem>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Hardware probing and detection now based on HAL and
-          <systemitem>udev</systemitem>
+          <systemitem>udev</systemitem>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Support for persistence in Live images on USB flash media
+          Support for persistence in Live images on USB flash media.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>




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