install-guide/devel/en_US expert-quickstart.xml,1.8,1.9

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Mar 19 19:46:37 UTC 2008


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3212

Modified Files:
	expert-quickstart.xml 
Log Message:
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Index: expert-quickstart.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/expert-quickstart.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- expert-quickstart.xml	11 Mar 2008 16:41:30 -0000	1.8
+++ expert-quickstart.xml	19 Mar 2008 19:46:34 -0000	1.9
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
     <para>Do any one of the following:</para>
     <tip>
       <title>Verify your downloads</title>
-      <para>Downloads fail for any number of reasons, always verify 
-        the sha1sum of the downloaded files.</para>
+      <para>Downloads may fail for any number of reasons.  Always verify
+	the sha1sum of the downloaded files.</para>
     </tip>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>




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