install-guide/devel/en_US expert-quickstart.xml,1.8,1.9
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Mar 19 19:46:37 UTC 2008
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3212
Modified Files:
expert-quickstart.xml
Log Message:
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Index: expert-quickstart.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/expert-quickstart.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- expert-quickstart.xml 11 Mar 2008 16:41:30 -0000 1.8
+++ expert-quickstart.xml 19 Mar 2008 19:46:34 -0000 1.9
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
<para>Do any one of the following:</para>
<tip>
<title>Verify your downloads</title>
- <para>Downloads fail for any number of reasons, always verify
- the sha1sum of the downloaded files.</para>
+ <para>Downloads may fail for any number of reasons. Always verify
+ the sha1sum of the downloaded files.</para>
</tip>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
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