install-guide/devel/en_US new-users.xml,1.19,1.20

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat May 10 14:31:57 UTC 2008


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv18797

Modified Files:
	new-users.xml 
Log Message:
Make it easy for impatient new users.



Index: new-users.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.19
retrieving revision 1.20
diff -u -r1.19 -r1.20
--- new-users.xml	19 Apr 2008 17:24:32 -0000	1.19
+++ new-users.xml	10 May 2008 14:31:54 -0000	1.20
@@ -12,15 +12,22 @@
 
 <chapter id="ch-new-users">
   <title>New Users</title>
-  <para>This chapter explains how to get the files you need to install
-    and run &DISTRO; on your computer.  Some of the concepts in this
-    chapter may be new, since you may never have downloaded a complete
-    free operating system.</para>
+  <para>
+    This chapter explains how to get the files you need to install and
+    run &DISTRO; on your computer.  Some of the concepts in this chapter
+    may be new, since you may never have downloaded a complete free
+    operating system.  If you have trouble with this chapter, you may be
+    able to find help by visiting the Fedora Forums at <ulink
+    url="http://www.fedoraforum.org/"/>.
+  </para>
   <tip>
-    <title>Additional Help</title>
-    <para>If you have trouble with this chapter, you may be able to find
-    help by visiting the Fedora Forums at <ulink
-    url="http://www.fedoraforum.org/"/>.</para>
+    <title>Download Links</title>
+    <para>
+      To follow a Web based guide to downloading, visit <ulink
+      url="http://get.fedoraproject.org/"/>.  For guidance on which
+      architecture to download, refer to <xref
+      linkend="sn-which-arch"/>.
+    </para>
   </tip>
   <section id="sn-howto-download">
     <title>How Do I Download Installation Files?</title>




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