release-notes/devel/en_US Desktop.xml,1.45,1.46

[Murray McAllister (mdious)]

Author: mdious

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4005/en_US

Modified Files:
	Desktop.xml 
Log Message:
minor fixes i missed :(



Index: Desktop.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Desktop.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.45
retrieving revision 1.46
diff -u -r1.45 -r1.46
--- Desktop.xml	17 May 2008 04:46:13 -0000	1.45
+++ Desktop.xml	17 May 2008 04:54:26 -0000	1.46
@@ -527,8 +527,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      For information about <application>Firefox</application> 3.0 in
-      Fedora, refer to this feature page:
+      For information about <application>Firefox</application> in Fedora, refer to this feature page:
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -548,7 +547,7 @@
       <para>
         Fedora includes <package>swfdec</package> and
         <package>gnash</package> , which are free and open source
-        implementations of Flash. We encourage you to try either or them
+        implementations of Flash. We encourage you to try either of them
 	before seeking out Adobe's proprietary Flash Player plug-in software. The Adobe Flash Player plug-in uses a legacy sound framework that does not work correctly without additional support. Run the following command to enable this support:
       </para>
 <screen>
@@ -557,7 +556,7 @@
 	<para>
         Users of Fedora x86_64 must install the
         <package>nspluginwrapper.i386</package> package to enable the
-        32-bit Adobe Flash plugin in x86_64
+        32-bit Adobe Flash plugin in
         <application>Firefox</application> and the
         <package>pulseaudio-libs.i386</package> package to enable sound
         from the plugin.