en_US/Networking.xml

[Paul W. Frields]

 en_US/Networking.xml |   14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 3a8bbb5f8b395157b0cebe0ec48f42fc9a89773c
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 20:35:29 2008 -0500

    Sync with latest wiki content; this beat complete.

diff --git a/en_US/Networking.xml b/en_US/Networking.xml
index f99c30c..4bbe453 100644
--- a/en_US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en_US/Networking.xml
@@ -8,18 +8,18 @@
     Fedora 10.</para>
   <section id="sn-Wireless_Connection_Sharing">
     <title>Wireless Connection Sharing</title>
+    <para>
+      The <application>NetworkManager</application> applet
+      <command>nm-applet</command> has been updated to provide better
+      connection sharing through the <guilabel>Create New Wireless
+      Network</guilabel> menu item.
+    </para>
     <para>Connection sharing makes it possible to easily set up an
       ad-hoc WiFi network on a machine with a network connection and a
-      spare wireless card. If the machine has primary network connection
+      spare wireless card. If the machine has a primary network connection
       (wired, 3G, second wireless card), routing is set up so that
       devices connected to the ad-hoc WiFi network can share the
       connection to the outside network.</para>
-    <para>This ability is provided by the
-      <application>NetworkManager</application> applet
-      <command>nm-applet</command>. Although
-      <command>nm-applet</command> has had a <guimenuitem>Create New
-	Wireless Network</guimenuitem> menu item for a long time, this
-      feature makes it work better.</para>
     <para>When you create a new WiFi network, you have to specify the
       name of the network and what kind of wireless security to use.
       NetworkManager then sets up the wireless card to work as an ad-hoc