en_US/System_services.xml

[Paul W. Frields]

 en_US/System_services.xml |   10 ++++++----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 274cf3c827264bd9c19c595a135662106e36bcd9
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 20:45:38 2008 -0500

    Sync latest content from the wiki for System Daemons beat.

diff --git a/en_US/System_services.xml b/en_US/System_services.xml
index d9dacbd..990b2f1 100644
--- a/en_US/System_services.xml
+++ b/en_US/System_services.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 	url="http://upstart.ubuntu.com/getting-started.html"/>
     </para>
     <para>Due to the change of <command>init</command> systems, it is recommended
-      that users who do an upgrade on a live file system to Fedora 9,
+      that users who do an upgrade on a live file system to Fedora 10,
       reboot soon afterwards.</para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-NetworkManager">
@@ -59,7 +59,8 @@
     the package installation tools.</para>
   </section><section id="sn-Varnih">
     <title>Varnish</title>
-    <para>Varnish is updated to version 2.0. The VCL syntax has changed
+    <para>Varnish, the high-performance HTTP acclerator, has been
+      updated to version 2.0. The VCL syntax has changed
       from version 1.x. Users who upgrade from 1.x must change their
       <filename>vcl</filename> files
       according to <filename>README.redhat</filename>. The most
@@ -74,8 +75,9 @@
 	<para> In the <filename>vcl</filename> declaration of
 	  backends, <computeroutput>set
 	    backend</computeroutput> has been simplified to
-	  <computeroutput>backend</computeroutput>, and backend
-	  parts are now just prefixed with a dot, so the default
+	  <computeroutput>backend</computeroutput>, and elements 
+	  within the backend
+	  are now just prefixed with a dot, so the default
 	  localhost configuration looks like this:</para>
 	<programlisting>
 	  backend default { .host = "127.0.0.1"; .port = "80"; }