3 commits - en_US/Feedback.xml en_US/Installation_notes.xml en_US/International_language_support.xml

[Karsten Wade]

 en_US/Feedback.xml                       |    3 +-
 en_US/Installation_notes.xml             |   37 ++++++++++---------------------
 en_US/International_language_support.xml |   12 ++--------
 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 5bb481eef04760253a196d7a7d24ee73cc3715d5
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 19:11:05 2008 -0800

    fixing https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=470363

diff --git a/en_US/International_language_support.xml b/en_US/International_language_support.xml
index d4a48a9..6bcb684 100644
--- a/en_US/International_language_support.xml
+++ b/en_US/International_language_support.xml
@@ -48,16 +48,10 @@
 	  <language>-support'</userinput>
       </screen>
       <para>In the command above,
-	<userinput><language></userinput> is one of
+	<userinput><language></userinput> is the actual language
+	name, such as
 	<userinput>assamese</userinput>, <userinput>bengali</userinput>,
-	<userinput>chinese</userinput>, <userinput>gujarati</userinput>,
-	<userinput>hindi</userinput>, <userinput>japanese</userinput>,
-	<userinput>kannada</userinput>, <userinput>korean</userinput>,
-	<userinput>malayalam</userinput>,
-	<userinput>marathi</userinput>, <userinput>oriya</userinput>,
-	<userinput>punjabi</userinput>, <userinput>sinhala</userinput>,
-	<userinput>tamil</userinput>, <userinput>telegu</userinput>,
-	<userinput>thai</userinput>, and so on.</para>
+	<userinput>chinese</userinput>, and so on.</para>
       <para>SCIM users upgrading from earlier releases of Fedora are
 	strongly urged to install <package>scim-bridge-gtk</package>,
 	which works well with third-party C++ applications linked


commit 8043135cc0c3e59fa42463613785f45a20c9a724
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 18:32:09 2008 -0800

    fixing https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=470357

diff --git a/en_US/Installation_notes.xml b/en_US/Installation_notes.xml
index 006fd4f..9a957f6 100644
--- a/en_US/Installation_notes.xml
+++ b/en_US/Installation_notes.xml
@@ -96,32 +96,19 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  <ulink
-	    url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda/Features/NetConfigForNM"/> 
-	  -- Anaconda is now using
-	  <application>NetworkManager</application> for configuring
-	  network interfaces during installation.  The previous backend
-	  tool was <systemitem class="library">libdhcp</systemitem>,
-	  which was a replacement for <systemitem
-	    class="library">libpump</systemitem>.
-	  <application>Anaconda</application> uses
-	  <application>NetworkManager</application> by communicating
-	  with it via D-Bus during installation. The move to
-	  <application>NetworkManager</application> in
-	  <application>Anaconda</application> is still ongoing, but the
-	  bulk of existing functionality has been retained.
-	  <application>NetworkManager</application> is enabled by
-	  default on newly installed systems, so moving to
-	  <application>NetworkManager</application> in
-	  <application>Anaconda</application> allows the installer to
-	  use the same network management tool that the final system
-	  uses. The move to <application>NetworkManager</application>
-	  brings some changes, most notably the removal of the network
+	  <application>NetworkManager</application> for Networking
+	  -- <application>Anaconda</application> is now using
+	  <application>NetworkManager</application> for configuration of
+	  network interfaces during installation.  Themain network
 	  interface configuration screen in
-	  <application>Anaconda</application>. You are no longer asked
-	  to verify the network settings during installation. The screen
-	  now simply prompts for the hostname. The settings used during
-	  installation are written to the system.</para>
+	  <application>Anaconda</application> has been removed.  Users
+	  are only prompted for network configuration details if they
+	  are necessary during installation.  The settings used during
+	  installatiokn are then written to the system.
+	</para>
+	<para>For more information, refer to  <ulink
+	    url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda/Features/NetConfigForNM"/>.
+	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>When using <filename>netinst.iso</filename> to boot


commit d5d816790fce23e2e837c7c645ece7b2af6402b9
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 18:22:44 2008 -0800

    fixing bz#470352

diff --git a/en_US/Feedback.xml b/en_US/Feedback.xml
index 3e97184..2d9597f 100644
--- a/en_US/Feedback.xml
+++ b/en_US/Feedback.xml
@@ -32,7 +32,8 @@
 	<para>Fill out a bug request using this template: <ulink
 	    url="http://tinyurl.com/nej3u"/> - <emphasis>This link is
 	    ONLY for feedback on the release notes
-	    themselves.</emphasis>  Refer to the admonition above for
+	    themselves.</emphasis>  Refer to <xref
+	    linkend="sn-Providing_feedback_on_Fedora_software"/> for
 	  details.</para>
       </listitem><listitem>
 	<para>Email <ulink