en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
David Nalley
ke4qqq at fedoraproject.org
Fri Nov 21 19:10:59 UTC 2008
en_US/beginninginstallation.xml | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
New commits:
commit 28291dd610221aee7c6cdfc6c67a0039138ae77f
Author: David Nalley <david at gnsa.us>
Date: Fri Nov 21 14:09:26 2008 -0500
split sentence in two as a matter of style as pointed out in comment 2 of ticket 455656
diff --git a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
index 214413b..9ef55df 100644
--- a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
+++ b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
or power off your computer with the power switch. You may
abort the installation process without consequence at any time
prior to selecting <guibutton>Write changes to disk</guibutton>
- on the <guilabel>Write partitioning to disk</guilabel> screen,
- as Fedora makes no permanent changes to your computer until
+ on the <guilabel>Write partitioning to disk</guilabel> screen.
+ Fedora makes no permanent changes to your computer until
that point. Please be aware that stopping the installation
after partitioning has begun can leave your computer unusable.
</para>
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