en_US/beginninginstallation.xml

David Nalley ke4qqq at fedoraproject.org
Fri Nov 21 19:10:59 UTC 2008


 en_US/beginninginstallation.xml |    4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 28291dd610221aee7c6cdfc6c67a0039138ae77f
Author: David Nalley <david at gnsa.us>
Date:   Fri Nov 21 14:09:26 2008 -0500

    split sentence in two as a matter of style as pointed out in comment 2 of ticket 455656

diff --git a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
index 214413b..9ef55df 100644
--- a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
+++ b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
       or power off your computer with the power switch. You may 
       abort the installation process without consequence at any time 
       prior to selecting <guibutton>Write changes to disk</guibutton>
-      on the <guilabel>Write partitioning to disk</guilabel> screen, 
-      as Fedora makes no permanent changes to your computer until 
+      on the <guilabel>Write partitioning to disk</guilabel> screen.
+      Fedora makes no permanent changes to your computer until 
       that point. Please be aware that stopping the installation 
       after partitioning has begun can leave your computer unusable.
     </para>





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