en-US/Kickstart2.xml en-US/Trouble_After_Booting_GUI-para-1.xml en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml

Rüdiger Landmann rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Mon Apr 6 00:08:40 UTC 2009


 en-US/Kickstart2.xml                       |    2 +-
 en-US/Trouble_After_Booting_GUI-para-1.xml |    5 +----
 en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml         |    2 +-
 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 25f2dbc1cdd1df23e21cc71c377aaea974926017
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Apr 6 10:08:26 2009 +1000

    Remove some RHEL-specific references

diff --git a/en-US/Kickstart2.xml b/en-US/Kickstart2.xml
index fe494c5..450ee87 100644
--- a/en-US/Kickstart2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kickstart2.xml
@@ -2372,7 +2372,7 @@ logvol / --vgname=myvg --size=2000 --name=rootvol</screen>
 					</para>
 <!-- BZ#241666	 -->
 					
-		<para>Note that in previous versions of Red Hat Enterprise Linux, this command was specified as <command>zerombr yes</command>. This form is now deprecated; you should now simply specify <command>zerombr</command> in your kickstart file instead.</para>			
+		<para>Note that this command was previously specified as <command>zerombr yes</command>. This form is now deprecated; you should now simply specify <command>zerombr</command> in your kickstart file instead.</para>			
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Trouble_After_Booting_GUI-para-1.xml b/en-US/Trouble_After_Booting_GUI-para-1.xml
index 3d6259c..c2a7d2d 100644
--- a/en-US/Trouble_After_Booting_GUI-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Trouble_After_Booting_GUI-para-1.xml
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd" [
-<!ENTITY % RH_ENTITIES SYSTEM "./Common_Config/rh-entities.ent">
-%RH_ENTITIES;
-
 ]>
 
 <para>
-	If you have installed the X Window System but are not seeing a graphical desktop environment once you log into your Red Hat Enterprise Linux system, you can start the X Window System graphical interface using the command
+	If you have installed the X Window System but are not seeing a graphical desktop environment once you log into your system, you can start the X Window System graphical interface using the command
 	<command moreinfo="none">startx</command>.
 </para>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml b/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml
index 177c021..b825812 100644
--- a/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml
+++ b/en-US/vnc_Installation_Chapter.xml
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-					Start the RHEL installation on the
+					Start the installation on the
 					target system.
 				</para>
 





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