A New Look at How We Write Content for the Desktop User Guide

Karsten 'quaid' Wade kwade at redhat.com
Tue Oct 7 19:25:34 UTC 2008


On Mon, 2008-10-06 at 04:59 +0530, Mani A wrote:
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> Elizabeth Ann West  wrote:
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> > operating system. These suggestions below are only for the Desktop Users
> > Guide, the specialized guide for new users of Fedora, presumably coming
> > from Windows, without Linux experience.
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> Some of the users may be having no prior experience with computers.
> Manuals for such people should include screen shots ...  and that is
> an optimization problem!

Agreed that there is a need for computer education for people without
experience using computers, but are we sure that Fedora wants to work on
that problem?

I think I'd rather see some common, upstream documentation that handles
that, such as from GNOME and KDE.  Then we can build from that as a
base.

> 1. New user does not learn about the name of the Add/Remove Software
> program. The first occurrence of "Add/Remove Software program" can be
> replaced by "Add/Remove Software program (called 'Pirut')".

How do they not learn about it?  Sorry, I'm not getting the initial
point.

In Fedora 9 and beyond, it is now PackageKit, and the main way to get it
is through the same '''Add/Remove Software''' launcher.  Because that is
setup to be a sort of alias or abstraction layer, I wonder if we want to
bother naming the application that currently runs underneath it?

For handling software updates in the Fedora 9 version of the User Guide,
it sounds like a good idea to keep Pirut/Pup documentation.  Note they
are a useful alternative that may have more features than came in the
initial PackageKit implementation.

> 2. 'kicker' is the whole of the main panel. "Fedora icon in the lower
> left corner called the Kicker" is just wrong.

I've never heard of any of that before.  Is there a canonical reference?

cheers - Karsten
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