A New Look at How We Write Content for the Desktop User Guide

[Mani A]

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Elizabeth Ann West  wrote:


> operating system. These suggestions below are only for the Desktop Users
> Guide, the specialized guide for new users of Fedora, presumably coming
> from Windows, without Linux experience.

Some of the users may be having no prior experience with computers.
Manuals for such people should include screen shots ...  and that is
an optimization problem!

>
> For discussion purposes, this is the old page:
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Drafts/DesktopUserGuide/Financial
>
> This is the new and improved page:
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User_Guide-Financial_Software
>


1. New user does not learn about the name of the Add/Remove Software
program. The first occurrence of "Add/Remove Software program" can be
replaced by "Add/Remove Software program (called 'Pirut')".

2. 'kicker' is the whole of the main panel. "Fedora icon in the lower
left corner called the Kicker" is just wrong.

3. There are two minor typos towards the end...."kickerand" and a
missing 'on' in the last line

Otherwise, it is good.


Best

A. Mani



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A. Mani
Member, Cal. Math. Soc


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