Website update
Rahul Sundaram
sundaram at fedoraproject.org
Tue May 15 22:05:39 UTC 2007
Máirín Duffy wrote:
> Rahul Sundaram wrote:
>> Fluffy, yea but but the text you have has two issues that I can spot.
>> Defining Linux as the operating system instead of Fedora as a Linux
>> based operating system runs us straight into the Linux vs GNU/Linux
>> debate which we have carefully sidestepped before.
>
> People know what "Linux" is.
Right. Changing from "Fedora is a linux operating system" to "Fedora is
a Linux based operating system" doesn't change that.
>
>> The last sentence "leading edge" is too close to "bleeding edge". I
>> would like to emphasize a bit more on robustness too.
>
> I disagree on that point but then again I'm not a professional writer.
Well I am, atleast technically. Karsten?
Rahul
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