web/static/F-7 get-fedora.html, 1.4, 1.5 index.html, 1.4, 1.5 join-fedora.html, 1.4, 1.5

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/fedora/web/static/F-7
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17664

Modified Files:
	get-fedora.html index.html join-fedora.html 
Log Message:
Finishing suggestions/ideas from Rahul (mether); changed the 'Evolutionary' since that was for FC-6; hope this one is suitable, since the changes are about to be pushed to the mirrors.  There are no too many links on the page, it's starting to look like it was designed by a committee, but just barely.  I also agree we want to find that content up-front-and-center; so it is the typical double-edged sword.  So be it.


Index: get-fedora.html
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/static/F-7/get-fedora.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- get-fedora.html	29 May 2007 22:22:14 -0000	1.4
+++ get-fedora.html	30 May 2007 04:40:25 -0000	1.5
@@ -41,6 +41,7 @@
           <ul>
             <li><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/">Wiki</a> Collaborative knowledge.</li>
             <li><a href="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Help</a> Fedora documentation.</li>
+	    <li><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate">Ask</a> Communicate with the community.</li>
             <li><a href="http://planet.fedoraproject.org/">Planet</a> The voices of the Fedora community.</li>
             <li><a href="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/">Release Notes</a></li>
           </ul>


Index: index.html
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/static/F-7/index.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- index.html	29 May 2007 22:22:14 -0000	1.4
+++ index.html	30 May 2007 04:40:25 -0000	1.5
@@ -41,6 +41,7 @@
           <ul>
             <li><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/">Wiki</a> Collaborative knowledge.</li>
             <li><a href="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Help</a> Fedora documentation.</li>
+	    <li><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate">Ask</a> Communicate with the community.</li>
             <li><a href="http://planet.fedoraproject.org/">Planet</a> The voices of the Fedora community.</li>
             <li><a href="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/">Release Notes</a></li>
           </ul>
@@ -50,18 +51,17 @@
         </p>
       </div>
       <div id="content">
-        <h2>Fedora 7.  Evolutionary.</h2>
+        <h2>Fedora 7.  Always Higher.</h2>
         <ul id="screenshot-banner">
           <li><a href="images/screenshots/login-screen.png"><img src="images/screenshot-1.jpg" alt="F7 Screenshot" /></a></li>
           <li><a href="images/screenshots/default-desktop.png"><img src="images/screenshot-2.jpg" alt="F7 Screenshot" /></a></li>
           <li><a href="images/screenshots/email-software.png"><img src="images/screenshot-3.jpg" alt="F7 Screenshot" /></a></li>
         </ul>
         <p>
-        Fedora is a Linux operating system that showcases the latest in free and open source software. Fedora is <strong>always free for anyone to use, modify, and distribute.</strong>  It is built by people across the globe who work together as a community: the Fedora Project. The Fedora Project is open and anyone is welcome to join.
+        Fedora is a Linux-based operating system that showcases the latest in free and open source software. Fedora is <strong>always free for anyone to use, modify, and distribute.</strong>  It is built by people across the globe who work together as a community: the Fedora Project. The Fedora Project is open and anyone is welcome to join.
         </p>
         <p>
-        The Fedora Project is out front for you, <strong>leading the advancement of free and
-          open source software</strong>.
+        The Fedora Project is out front for you, <strong>leading the advancement of free, open software and content</strong>.
         </p>
         <a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview">Learn more >></a>
       </div>


Index: join-fedora.html
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/static/F-7/join-fedora.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- join-fedora.html	29 May 2007 22:22:14 -0000	1.4
+++ join-fedora.html	30 May 2007 04:40:25 -0000	1.5
@@ -41,6 +41,7 @@
           <ul>
             <li><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/">Wiki</a> Collaborative knowledge.</li>
             <li><a href="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Help</a> Fedora documentation.</li>
+	    <li><a href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate">Ask</a> Communicate with the community.</li>
             <li><a href="http://planet.fedoraproject.org/">Planet</a> The voices of the Fedora community.</li>
             <li><a href="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/">Release Notes</a></li>
           </ul>