install-guide/devel/en_US new-intro.xml, 1.3, 1.4 new-users.xml, 1.5, 1.6
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 6 14:14:55 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19384/en_US
Modified Files:
new-intro.xml new-users.xml
Log Message:
Some reorg and tagging fixes
Index: new-intro.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- new-intro.xml 29 Apr 2007 18:37:27 -0000 1.3
+++ new-intro.xml 6 May 2007 14:14:53 -0000 1.4
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@
online,</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>create media and configuration data that allows a
- computer to boot &DISTRO;,</para>
+ <para>create configuration data that allows a computer to boot
+ &DISTRO;,</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>understand and interact with the &DISTRO; installation
@@ -61,10 +61,13 @@
&DISTRO; system.</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- <para>This guide does not cover use of &DISTRO;. To learn how to
- use an installed &DISTRO; system, refer to <ulink
- url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/"/> for documents such as
- the &DISTRO; New Users Guide.</para>
+ <tip>
+ <title>Other Sources of Documentation</title>
+ <para>This guide does not cover use of &DISTRO;. To learn how to
+ use an installed &DISTRO; system, refer to <ulink
+ url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/"/> for other
+ documentation.</para>
+ </tip>
</section>
<section id="sn-audience">
<title>Audience</title>
@@ -74,28 +77,26 @@
Anaconda development mailing list at <ulink
url="http://www.redhat.com/archives/anaconda-devel-list/"/>.</para>
</section>
- <section id="sn-feedback">
- <title>Feedback</title>
- <indexterm>
- <primary>FDP</primary>
- <see>&FDP;</see>
- </indexterm>
- <indexterm>
- <primary>&FDP;</primary>
- </indexterm>
- <para>The &FDP; (FDP) is a group of volunteer writers, editors,
- translators, and other contributors who create content for free
- and open source software. The FDP maintains this document and is
- always interested in reader feedback.</para>
- <para>To send feedback regarding this document, send email to
- <ulink
- url="mailto:docs at fedoraproject.org">docs at fedoraproject.org</ulink>,
- or visit <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/"/> to file a
- bug in &BZ;. If you choose to file a bug, fill in "&BZ-PROD;" as
- the Product, choose the name of this document from the Component
- list, and choose "devel" as the version. FDP volunteers receive
- your feedback, and may contact you for additional information if
- necessary.</para>
- </section>
+ </section>
+ <section id="sn-feedback">
+ <title>Feedback</title>
+ <indexterm>
+ <primary>FDP</primary>
+ <see>&FDP;</see>
+ </indexterm>
+ <indexterm>
+ <primary>&FDP;</primary>
+ </indexterm>
+ <para>The &FDP; (FDP) is a group of volunteer writers, editors,
+ translators, and other contributors who create content for free
+ and open source software. The FDP maintains this document and is
+ always interested in reader feedback.</para>
+ <para>To send feedback regarding this document, send email to <ulink
+ url="mailto:docs at fedoraproject.org">docs at fedoraproject.org</ulink>,
+ or visit <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/"/> to file a bug
+ in &BZ;. To file a bug, fill in "&BZ-PROD;" as the Product, choose
+ the name of this document from the Component list, and choose
+ "devel" as the version. FDP volunteers receive your feedback, and
+ may contact you for additional information if necessary.</para>
</section>
</chapter>
Index: new-users.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- new-users.xml 2 May 2007 02:57:42 -0000 1.5
+++ new-users.xml 6 May 2007 14:14:53 -0000 1.6
@@ -93,13 +93,14 @@
that is geographically close to you for faster speed.</para>
<para>Mirrors publish &DISTRO; software under a well-organized
hierarchy of folders. For example, the &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;
- distribution normally appears in the directory
- &FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/. This directory contains a
- folder for each architecture supported by that release of
- &DISTRO;. CD and DVD media files appear inside that folder, in a
- folder called iso/. For example, you can find the file for the
- DVD distribution of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; for x86_64 at
- &FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/x86_64/iso/&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso.</para>
+ distribution normally appears in the directory <filename
+ class="directory">&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/</filename>.
+ This directory contains a folder for each architecture supported
+ by that release of &DISTRO;. CD and DVD media files appear
+ inside that folder, in a folder called iso/. For example, you
+ can find the file for the DVD distribution of &DISTRO;
+ &DISTROVER; for x86_64 at
+ <filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/x86_64/iso/&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso</filename>.</para>
</section>
<section id="sn-which-download-bt">
<title>From BitTorrent</title>
@@ -186,7 +187,8 @@
<para>The architecture type appears in the name of the downloadable
files for each &DISTRO; distribution. For example, the file for
the DVD distribution of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; for x86_64 is named
- &FCX;-&DISTROVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso. Refer to <xref
+ <filename>&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso</filename>. Refer to
+ <xref
linkend="sn-which-arch"/> if you are unsure of your computer's
architecture.</para>
<orderedlist>
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