translation-quick-start-guide/en_US Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml, 1.7, 1.8

[Noriko Mizumoto (noriko)]

Author: noriko

Update of /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv20773/en_US

Modified Files:
	Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml 
Log Message:
fixed bug#441168


Index: Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	2 Mar 2008 23:05:57 -0000	1.7
+++ Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	11 Apr 2008 06:20:04 -0000	1.8
@@ -273,20 +273,12 @@
     <procedure>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  Visit <ulink
-	    url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/UserPreferences/"/>. For
-	  your username, choose a name like 'FirstnameLastname' and
-	  select <guilabel>Create Profile</guilabel>.
+	  A current wiki user can give you Edit access on the wiki. Contact someone from the Edit Group at <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroup/"/>, or add your name to the EditGroupQueue at <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroupQueue/"/>, and someone will add you shortly.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  A current wiki user can now give you Edit access on the wiki.
-	  Contact someone from the Edit Group at <ulink
-	    url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroup/"/>, or add
-	  your name to the EditGroupQueue at <ulink
-	    url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroupQueue/"/>, and
-	  someone will add you shortly.
+	  Once added, Visit <ulink   url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/UserPreferences/"/> and create a profile page. For your username, choose a name like 'FirstnameLastname' and select <guilabel>Create Profile</guilabel>.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>