3 commits - en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml en-US/Boot.xml

[Karsten Wade]

 en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml |   29 +++++++++++++++++++----------
 en-US/Boot.xml                   |   12 +++++++-----
 2 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit bd6bdd853ec9ce8b5d771d40eca499834540c7f0
Author: Karsten Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 15:41:07 2009 -0700

    adding type of action happening in screen block -- could be userinput, etc.; there really isn't any markup that makes sense of a 'yum group name', so let's just not mark it up.

diff --git a/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml b/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml
index ead5a5c..a6892f5 100644
--- a/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml
+++ b/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml
@@ -8,15 +8,16 @@
   url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility</ulink></remark>
   <para>
     Fedora provides legacy system libraries for compatibility with
-    older software. This software is part of the <application>Legacy
-    Software Development</application> group, which is not installed
-    by default. Users who require this functionality may select this
-    group either during installation or after the installation process
-    is complete. To install the package group on a Fedora system, use
-    Applications > Add/Remove Software or enter the following command
-    in a terminal window:
+    older software. This software is part of the Legacy Software
+    Development group, which is not installed by default. Users who
+    require this functionality may select this group either during
+    installation or after the installation process is complete. To
+    install the package group on a Fedora system, use
+    <guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Add/Remove
+    Software</guimenuitem> or enter the following command in a
+    terminal window:
     <screen>
-      su -c 'yum groupinstall "Legacy Software Development"'
+      <command>su -c 'yum groupinstall "Legacy Software Development"'</command>
     </screen>
     Enter the password for the root account when prompted. 
   </para>


commit 254ed8f70228d5b8113228fcba4038c2b451d895
Author: Karsten Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 15:33:51 2009 -0700

    fixing indents and line endings to make for sane diffs

diff --git a/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml b/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml
index 5831d2d..ead5a5c 100644
--- a/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml
+++ b/en-US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml
@@ -3,13 +3,21 @@
 ]>
 
 <section>
-        <title>Backwards Compatibility</title>
-        <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility</ulink></remark>
-        <para>
-		Fedora provides legacy system libraries for compatibility with older software. This software is part of the <application>Legacy Software Development</application> group, which is not installed by default. Users who require this functionality may select this group either during installation or after the installation process is complete. To install the package group on a Fedora system, use Applications > Add/Remove Software or enter the following command in a terminal window:
-		<screen>
-			su -c 'yum groupinstall "Legacy Software Development"'
-		</screen>
-		Enter the password for the root account when prompted. 
-	</para>
- </section>
+  <title>Backwards Compatibility</title>
+  <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http"
+  url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility</ulink></remark>
+  <para>
+    Fedora provides legacy system libraries for compatibility with
+    older software. This software is part of the <application>Legacy
+    Software Development</application> group, which is not installed
+    by default. Users who require this functionality may select this
+    group either during installation or after the installation process
+    is complete. To install the package group on a Fedora system, use
+    Applications > Add/Remove Software or enter the following command
+    in a terminal window:
+    <screen>
+      su -c 'yum groupinstall "Legacy Software Development"'
+    </screen>
+    Enter the password for the root account when prompted. 
+  </para>
+</section>


commit 1cc8ce0e3f56c891758e26d8e33596b547143c2a
Author: Karsten Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 15:29:24 2009 -0700

    adding markup for daemon

diff --git a/en-US/Boot.xml b/en-US/Boot.xml
index d1716b0..c7bdacc 100644
--- a/en-US/Boot.xml
+++ b/en-US/Boot.xml
@@ -4,12 +4,14 @@
 
 <section>
         <title>Fedora 11 Boot Time</title>
-        <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Boot">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Boot</ulink></remark>
+        <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http"
+        url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Boot">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Boot</ulink></remark>
         <para>
-	  To reduce boot time, the setroubleshoot daemon and several
-	  small bottlenecks were removed. Regressions in using the
-	  readahead service were removed by setting low I/O
+	  To reduce boot time, the <systemitem
+	  class="daemon">setroubleshootd</systemitem> daemon and
+	  several small bottlenecks were removed. Regressions in using
+	  the readahead service were removed by setting low I/O
 	  priorities. Readahead now profiles the system every time the
-	  rpm database changes.
+	  RPM database changes.
 	</para>
     </section>