preparing websites content for Fedora 10

Giulio Fidente gfidente at redhat.com
Thu Oct 2 13:13:38 UTC 2008


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Patrick C. F. Ernzer wrote:
>> http://craigt.fedorapeople.org/get-fedora/get-fedora
> 
> Very nice work. A few comments.

very nice ... really!

my 2cents are just about the description of the "live" spin, I think it
should explain in someway better what a live spin is.

For example, instead of: "It combines the best of breed software
packages that a typical home user would use that fits into a CD." we
could write something like "It permits you to run Fedora and all the
packages that a typical home user would use, even without installing it!"

Giulio
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